Filbones Reviews

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Hi guys,

Due to so many new missions and obligations This thread is no longer accepting new missions. I would like to dedicate more time to helping new Foundry Authors. So head over to Filbones Critical Analysis (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?p=3715135#post3715135) thread or subscribe and I'll let you know when I am accepting polished missions again. Thank you all for the support and good luck.

Filbones

Filbones Reviews

This thread is for polished missions or final drafts looking for feedback as well as the possibility of publicity. If your a first time author or have a mission in development head over too the Filbones Critical Analysis (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?p=3715135#post3715135) thread.

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LINKS : youtube, photobucket, StarbaseUGC.com or FoundryMissions.com etc...

I would also love a brief description of how you made the mission and came up with your missions concepts. Also include any current bugs or design flaws your having trouble over coming.

When will I receive the review? I will send you mail in game that the review has been published within this thread. I will also let you know if I am to help promote your mission within this letter. There is a play list bellow for your reference as well.

Why have you started a new thread? The original thread Filbones Reviews Your Mission (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?t=207109&highlight=filbones) was created for Tribble testing during Foundry's early beta days. I had no idea that the Foundry Beta forum would be conformed to the current one. I have always planned to do a solely Holodeck thread and now is the best time to do it.

Can I submit more than one mission or one that you have already reviewed? Yes, however it will not be added to the play list until I have played your first or current submission.

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SYNOPSIS: My interpretation of the mission.
ANALYSIS: My critical opinion towards the missions Gameplay, Trek, Design, Difficulty and grind ability.
PROS: What I think this mission excels at or why it's worth playing.
CONS: The flaws of this mission from my perspective. Aspects of the content I feel work against the missions potential.
VERDICT: Over all perspective towards the missions survivability within the community rankings.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - My enjoyment & memorability of the mission
TREK - The influence and interaction of characters & script within the story
DESIGN - Execution of maps and direction created to advance the quest line.
DIFFICULTY - The playability & challenge of objectives and NPC's.
GRIND – Overall interest & attention I gave to your mission.
THOUGHTS: A constructive opinion of your mission for interested players as well as promotions.
*****/Stars (How many Stars I gave your mission.)

Can I reply to your Review? Keeping an open communication between an Author and his audience is why I do this. Please feel free to reply within this thread. If your upset with my perspective of your mission and your post might border on breaching forum regulations. I recommend you send me a PM or message. I will not report you. Or alternatively you can try and contact me through the StarbaseUGC (http://starbaseugc.com/) channels.

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1. "Hidden Intelligence" By Bazag (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3715933&postcount=7)
2. "Digging in the past" By Castmodean (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3717948&postcount=9)
3. "The Good Doctor: Rings of Caro" By @Patchouli (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3725434&postcount=13)
4. "Yesterday is Tomorrow" By Leviathan99 (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3744645&postcount=15)
5. Spawn of Medusa" By Duke-of-Rock (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3757697&postcount=23)
6. “Deadly Intentions - Part 1” By Sovereign77x (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3959567&postcount=35)
7. “Respect For Your Elders” By Capt.PFDennis (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3961228&postcount=36)
8. "Final Judgement” By Leviathan99 (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3975075&postcount=41)
9. “Not Our War” By Zondi (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3978626&postcount=42)
10. “Breen Beachhead” By Gregg247 (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3994135&postcount=45)
11. “Safeguards” By Attilio“Safeguards” By Attilio (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3994271&postcount=48)
12. “A Private Civil War” By Stylsy (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=4035403&postcount=55)

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78 4. "Yesterday is Tomorrow" By Leviathan99 *****/Stars
70 3. "The Good Doctor: Rings of Caro" By @Patchouli ****/Stars
68 2. "Digging in the past" By Castmodean *****/Stars
68 7. “Respect For Your Elders” By Capt.PFDennis *****/Stars
66 8. "Final Judgement” By Leviathan99 *****/Stars
66 5. "Spawn of Medusa" By Duke-of-Rock *****/Stars
66 6. “Deadly Intentions - Part 1” By Sovereign77x ****/Stars
62 11. “Safeguards” By Attilio *****/Stars
62 9. “Not Our War” By Zondi ****/Stars
60 1. "Hidden Intelligence" By Bazag *****/Stars
52 10. “Breen Beachhead” By Gregg247 ****/Stars
52 12. “A Private Civil War” By Stylsy ****/Stars

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I suppose I'll get my mission up here first...

TITLE : Hidden Intelligence
AUTHOR : Bazag
CODE : ST-HU6ZYFPS9
LEVEL : Any Level
LOCATION : Starts at Memory Alpha, goes to JFS47 System in Pi Canis Sector block
LENGTH : 30 minutes or so
TAGS : Federation, Diplomatic, Puzzle, Ground
DESCRIPTION : Scientists at Memory Alpha need some help. A substance has been discovered to have a basic level of intelligence. The only problem is that they have no way to asses it's true level of intelligence. You have been tasked to retrace the steps of the recovering party in the hopes that it would provide a test of intelligence in a real world environment and discover more about it's origin.
LINKS: http://starbaseugc.com/wiki/index.php/Hidden_Intelligence

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TITLE : Digging in the Past
AUTHOR : @castmodean
CODE : ST-HGE2R2OBO
LEVEL : 31+
LOCATION : Andoria
LENGTH : Core mission 30m longer if you run through any of the side portions
TAGS : FED, COM, GND,
DESCRIPTION : Starfleet command has seconded your ship to the Federation Archeology Council. You are ordered to report to Hravishran Station in the Andorian System, Sirius Sector. Once at the station, you are to transport a representative of the Federation Archaeological Council and her delegation to the Goralis System, near Cardassia.

LINKS : StarbaseUGC.com, come join the fun.

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"Hidden Intelligence" By Bazag
TITLE : Hidden Intelligence
AUTHOR : Bazag
CODE : ST-HU6ZYFPS9
LEVEL : Any Level
LOCATION : Starts at Memory Alpha, goes to JFS47 System in Pi Canis Sector block
LENGTH : 30 minutes or so
TAGS : Federation, Diplomatic, Puzzle, Ground
DESCRIPTION : Scientists at Memory Alpha need some help. A substance has been discovered to have a basic level of intelligence. The only problem is that they have no way to asses it's true level of intelligence. You have been tasked to retrace the steps of the recovering party in the hopes that it would provide a test of intelligence in a real world environment and discover more about it's origin.
LINKS: http://starbaseugc.com/wiki/index.php/Hidden_Intelligence

SYNOPSIS: Escort a VIP Blob to it's place of origin to hopefully find another blob. Known to the StarbaseUGC community as the space poo. I just hope it doesn't have a relation to that of which appears in the TV show South Park.
ANALYSIS: Still needs allot of polish towards directing the player. At times I was very lost and didn't know where the mission concluded from. Puzzles were scary at first, but once you figure out the equation of them, they are relatively easy. Loved the fact that you can't advance in the story unless you have been paying attention to the plot line and popups. Bob is so funny I was nearly crying with laughter in parts. I hope this isn't the conclusion to bob. This mission had allot more potential, however I enjoyed it as one of those less serious Trek episodes.
PROS: One of the funniest missions I've played. Great interactive puzzles. Excellent map design. Brilliant interaction with mission characters including an imaginary one.
CONS: The mission doesn't stand on it's own without playing the prequel. Pointless sector space travel. Mission direction in dialog was not highlighted and offend over looked while comprehending the text. Quest line was offend not supportive to the game play due to it's format.
VERDICT: Bazag is an amazing author. Some spelling and punctuation errors and little direction towards objectives do not hinder on the enjoyment of this mission. Any fans of BOB will love this new edition to Bazag's growing portfolio of well executed missions.
RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 4
TREK – 2.5
DESIGN - 4
DIFFICULTY - 2
GRIND – 2.5
THOUGHTS: If you love Bob, then you will love this. Designed for more experienced Foundry players. Will definitely have you in stitches. I want a bob Plush toy.
*****/Stars

This might need a Critical Analysis if you get similar feedback from others.

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TITLE : The Good Doctor: Rings of Caro
AUTHOR : @Patchouli (JanusII in #StarbaseUGC)
CODE : ST-HA43RNGTD
LEVEL : Any Level
LOCATION : Earth Spacedock, Lower Level
LENGTH : Depends highly on reading speed, longest playtime in a review was three hours
TAGS : [FED] [GND] [SPC] [SRP]
DESCRIPTION : The remains of a Starfleet cruiser passed to a third party generations ago have found their way into restricted Romulan space. At the request of the grandson of her commanding officer, ESD's newest promoted Fleet Admiral sends you on a recovery operation. A battle that was never meant to happen unfolds as a result of the ship's illegal experiments, ones impossible if you had never used the Guardian of Forever.
LINKS : http://starbaseugc.com/wiki/index.php/The_Good_Doctor:_Rings_of_Caro

I considered this mission "polished" before this season, and I'd like to think it's a good first attempt. There may be some reworking as new tools come out, but the general story likely won't change much. There are several obscure references for fans, but the main plot only requires the player to know about the augment subplots around Miral Paris and the circumstances of Ambassador Spock's disappearance. All but two characters were created entirely for this mission. My wish in the future is to have a series based on alternate timelines that the player visits, making a difference in the lives of characters.

This started as an unknown test in mission making on Tribble that I completely remade and expanded on Holodeck. The main complaint has been length, but I don't see being able to leave the system in the middle of the story as being very practical. As you would say, walls of text! It wound up much longer than my original concept, a simple introduction to a series of missions, so I began making sure good chunks of the dialog were a side attraction. The primary reason is that there are characters I simply wouldn't be able to feature again, but I still wanted to tell their stories in log files, recordings, and a certain surprise or two.

The only new bugs, as a result of recent patches, are characters not speaking with the appropriate animation at times, and one nonessential Klingon NPC's dialog not being reachable. They're minor and shouldn't have any relevance to completing objectives.

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"Digging in the past" By Castmodean
TITLE : Digging in the Past
AUTHOR : @castmodean
CODE : ST-HGE2R2OBO
LEVEL : 31+
LOCATION : Andoria
LENGTH : Core mission 30m longer if you run through any of the side portions
TAGS : FED, COM, GND,
DESCRIPTION : Starfleet command has seconded your ship to the Federation Archeology Council. You are ordered to report to Hravishran Station in the Andorian System, Sirius Sector. Once at the station, you are to transport a representative of the Federation Archaeological Council and her delegation to the Goralis System, near Cardassia.
LINKS : StarbaseUGC.com (www.starbaseugc.com), come join the fun.

SYNOPSIS: Travel to a space station in the Andorian System to deliver a deligate when things go drastically wrong and you are forced to save and discover the very reason your delegate needs an escourt.
ANALYSIS: I have played this mission at least three different times. It is one of the classics that has survived from Tribble Beta + Triggers + Holodeck + NWO Foundry Collaboration. It is by far one of the best prelude to a crisis missions. I would of liked more within one mission, but the side quests may implement more time on this mission then the audience is prepared for. Love all the new map editions since the last time I played and the docking with the station was jaw dropping. It's unfortunate that the foundry limits this authors creation. Animation, wandering, wall and floor bugs do not take away the plot line and its surprises. I like the fact that this mission has become more of a discovery mission, rather than the regimented plot and dialog it was forced to use in previous edits due to foundry tools not yet implemented.
PROS: You can rely on this author for a well designed mission and the ability to enjoy his story with no confusion. There are elements to the mission that literal take you by surprise and create suspense. Plenty of content to explore outside of the actual quest line. Attention to detail encourages and comforts the player to learn what they are supposed to be achieving. Objectives are well directed and you don't have to reference the questline at all.
CONS: Wandering and animation effect radius's are too large and take away the realism of the environment. Shoot through walls and NPC behavior as well as floor bug spoil the stories situation. Possibly to many NPC's within maps create a crowded and claustrophobic atmosphere and interupt with camera angles.
VERDICT: Castmodean is a map creation specialist within the foundry and this mission is evident of that. Being one of this authors first and original missions, it has flourished and sustained itself through many Foundry updates and changes. Every time I have played it the Author has reinvented it and as the series continues. I can't see that changing. There are elements of this mission that will leave you speechless and asking yourself how did he do that?

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY – 4
TREK – 3.5
DESIGN – 4
DIFFICULTY – 3
GRIND – 2.5
OVERALL – 68
THOUGHTS: A superb mission for any level of foundry player. Playable and enjoyable, however foundry bugs and limitations are the only thing that hold it back.
*****/Stars

More play throughs and foundry updates are needed to make this mission perfect. I'd love more side quests please?

NOTES :
Perhaps you might consider doing an all level version buy dressing NPC's.
Wasn't this mission just at worf 359? Wow the first map was awesome. The warp in over the top of my ship by freighters was so exciting. My crew is stuck in the bottom of the transporter. Oh side mission was fun until I choose the wrong text and couldn't complete it. My away team had trouble getting out of a respawn point because it was in a room. Cardassian in hall way dressed as a TOS klingon?

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****/Stars

Thanks for the review filbones, I've updated the dialogue to more clearly allow for people who haven't played Starfleet Experimentation to play Hidden Intelligence and I've added highlights and some cases extra prompts to to make it clear what you need to do next.

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"Stab"
*****/Stars
No Review pop up but will add all reviews once it's working again.

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Name: Yesterday is Tomorrow
Project ID: ST-HNCZPAE54
Faction: Federation
Level Restriction: None
Location: Vulcan

This one is meaty. Lengthy. Dense on plot and combat, potentially. Has a few minor puzzles as well.

If you're a fan of "Space Seed" or Voyager's "Future' End" or "First Contact", check it out.

This probably the densest mission I've seen in the game. I'll add a trailer after I get some reviews.

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"The Good Doctor: Rings of Caro" By @Patchouli
TITLE : The Good Doctor: Rings of Caro
AUTHOR : @Patchouli (JanusII in #StarbaseUGC)
CODE : ST-HA43RNGTD
LEVEL : Any Level
LOCATION : Earth Spacedock, Lower Level
LENGTH : Depends highly on reading speed, longest playtime in a review was three hours
TAGS : [FED] [GND] [SPC] [SRP]
DESCRIPTION : The remains of a Starfleet cruiser passed to a third party generations ago have found their way into restricted Romulan space. At the request of the grandson of her commanding officer, ESD's newest promoted Fleet Admiral sends you on a recovery operation. A battle that was never meant to happen unfolds as a result of the ship's illegal experiments, ones impossible if you had never used the Guardian of Forever.
LINKS : http://starbaseugc.com/wiki/index.php/The_Good_Doctor:_Rings_of_Caro


SYNOPSIS: Salvage a mysterious ship wreck and uncover it's secrets as well as delve into the past of the VIP your escorting. Every character has a story and this mission doesn't leave anyone out.
ANALYSIS: This mission is very... very... text heavy. It's bigger than most novels I read. By fare the longest and best Wall-O-Text mission I have played. Unfortunately it is easy to lose track of the main plot line. It is made up with amusing colloquialisms based of Trek, Pop Culture and Foundryisms. “Please state the nature of the ????” Hilarious! I am not a friend of the TXT heavy foundry mission, but this had me laughing and intrigued right up to the debriefing. Great mix of enemies as the story continues and amazing use of Pop ups and interactions to tell the story. This Author has an exuberant amount of Foundry knowledge and this missions development and polish will make him a well sort after foundry creator.
PROS: A high quality of detail towards dialog, map creation and object interaction. The story and character subplots are highly detailed and characterized. Optional extras are vast and easy to follow. Great direction towards objectives.
CONS: No definitive option to play the mission with only main plot line dialog and interaction. Heavy dialog makes for a long mission in an already unpopular Foundry category. Use of NPC enemies are hard and sometimes over whelming.
VERDICT: I do not like TXT based missions. I encourage all authors to create there missions with only TXT that advances the plot line. This missions is the exception and as it has been in development and been analyzed and played at various stages of it's development. It is a land mark achievement for the Foundry. This is not a Foundry mission or a Story, it is a created universe. I just wish the author could of used all these characters and story to make an amazing series with more than just the one climax offered in this mission.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY – 3
TREK – 3
DESIGN – 4
DIFFICULTY – 3
GRIND – 4.5
OVERALL – 70
THOUGHTS: A massive adventure filled with new characters and the option to explore each and every one of there backgrounds. The best TXT based mission I have played on Foundry.
****/Stars

Forget this mission, it is polished enough. I want to play more missions with these characters.

NOTES : 2.5 hours later and now I have to figure out what to say about it.

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Greetings filbones,

Now that you are back to your reviewing status, I'd like to submit mine for your thoughts.

Title: Spawn of Medusa
Author: Duke-of-Rock
Code: ST-HCQTJBEGV
Level: Any Level
Location: Starting at Seedea System, Pi Canis Sector Block
Length: Approximately 1 hour
Tags: FED, SPACE, GROUND, COMBAT
Description: You are ordered to assist a Klingon aquaintance from a previous encounter and investigate a
new threat to the Quadrant and the Federation.

This is a story about a species from eons past that has re-emerged and intends to conquer all within their grasp. A Klingon Captain who you have a mutual respect for from a previous mission (Omega Directive Revisited) has requested your help as the Empire is under attack from this species. Why would you assist the Klingons in an endeavor that threatens them, you may wonder? Your previous contact with this particular Klingon Captain and her assistance to help you fight a common enemy is the motivation behind the plot. You will quickly learn that this evil new matriarchal structured species is a danger not only to the Klingons, but the whole of the Alpha and Beta Quadrants.

This is the pilot to a multi-part story Arc, but I feel it sets the tone for the next missions nicely, and does not leave you feeling as though you have an uncompleted mission. There are a few Trek Trivia based puzzles in some unexpected locations, but I chose to use easy puzzles in this first part for beginner players, as this is available to all ranks. The beginning dialogue has an "encoded" data question that refers to the Omega Directive Revisited mission, but you can randomly answer quickly to unlock the message, making the need to know the info from the previous mission unnecessary. I have this in the mission for some friends that played the previous mission, but made it very easy to get through otherwise.

Bug issue: In the Catacombs there is a Boff pathing issue that at first, left you alone to fight an enemy mob in the next chamber. I did relocate a spawn point, and now the Boffs will follow you into the fight. However, even though they are not needed following the battle, the pathing bug will leave them at the fight location as you proceed before returning to you in the next map transition. This will not affect the mission completion but it is and unfortunate bug that I cannot correct due to the Foundry's current status with these issues.
I hope you give it a try. Thanks.

Duke-of-Rock

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"Yesterday is Tomorrow" By Leviathan99
Name: Yesterday is Tomorrow
Project ID: ST-HNCZPAE54
Faction: Federation
Level Restriction: None
Location: Vulcan


SYNOPSIS: This mission incorporates all the foundry cliché plot lines and story mechanics brought to you in an adventures original form. Missing artifact, ship dead in space, save a culture, romantic interest and much much more.
ANALYSIS: At first, foundry bugs take your attention away from enjoying the story. NPC's following my Boffs as they fall through the floor. Very aggravating until you realize that this is a mission that can not be rushed and it is in the players best interest to take time with dialogs and objectives. Characters are introduced at a good pace and they make you feel apart of the story. Interacting is usually rudimentary with foundry missions, but multiple objectives and popup option have you on the edge of your seat. If I had never played a foundry mission before I would say this is better then any of Cryptic's episodes. As always, Leviathan99 has gone along way to design the maps to feel authentic, genuine and appealing. The vast use of foundry elements make this mission an adventure as entertaining as an early Steven Spielberg movie.
PROS: Vibrant colorful and realistic maps. Brilliant choose of interaction and character as well as there actions. Follows all the generic objective and direction text professionally. Great story and Star Trek elements.
CONS: Foundry bugs such as Boffs falling through floors and beam in emote from a distance as NPC's spawn.
VERDICT: I had high expectations when reviewing this author having played previous missions. Very rarely are my hopes and expectations for a foundry mission underestimated, but this mission clearly takes the cake. Not much I can say to do it justice. No foundry missions is perfect, but this is probably as close as it gets.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY – 4.5
TREK – 4.5
DESIGN – 4.5
DIFFICULTY – 3
GRIND – 3
OVERALL – 78
THOUGHTS: Greatest mission I have played on foundry. The foundry limitations don't do this author justice. Congrats on yet another brilliant mission. TY. You remind me why I enjoy reviewing.

*****/Stars

I have tried to do a Movie like foundry mission and you have pulled it off. So jelly right now.

NOTES : NPC groups at Monastery are buggy because of floor NPC bug.

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I'll get my next one up too...


TITLE : The Mysteries of Pon Farr
AUTHOR : Bazag
CODE : ST-HGYYMXEB3
LEVEL : +16
LOCATION : Starts at Vulcan
LENGTH : Approx 1 hour
TAGS : Federation, Combat, Ground, Puzzle
DESCRIPTION : Something rather unusual is happening on Vulcan. Vulcan couples who are undergoing the extremely private ritual of Pon Farr have disappeared. Same with the Vulcan Monks who went in seeking them.

It's up to you having been contacted directly by Elder Sardek to locate the couples and the monks that were sent after them. However will you be caught in the same trap? Can you escape your captors and foil an insidous plot to destroy the Vulcan people? Are things as they seem? Find out today.

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TITLE : Alpha And Omega - The Prologue
AUTHOR : Mazimer
CODE : ST-HJ98FSVTW
LEVEL : 41+
LOCATION : Starts at Deep Space K-7 (from sector space)
LENGTH : 5-10 mins, about 12-15 if u thoroughly read the dialogue
TAGS : Federation, Prologue, Space, Puzzle
DESCRIPTION : A large KDF force has been detected in the Alpha Zarini system, previously only known by long-range scans. Its strategic value is low and it seems to have very few natural resources, so a large KDF force there could mean trouble.

A somewhat large Federation attack force is sent in to investigate the matter once You deliver a new piece of technology to them. Nobody knows exactly what to expect, but either way, the KDF force's purpose in that system must be established.


The prologue to my other missions, this mission only introduces You to the events leading to the first mission.

it's not heavy on foundry mechanics, my second mission is tho



RogueEnterprise has already reviewed it and found a major visual bug that i cannot fix:

on lowest, high and highest (0, 2 and 3 thirds of quality bar, respectively) you get funky visuals which really look bad (caused by the sun -distant object on background- which i don't think you can remove)

therefore, i HIGHLY recommend you play this mission on 1/3 the quality slider bar, because only then it looks the way it's supposed to.


also, reading the dialogue is important to the story itself in the 1st mission


1 final note:

the last spawn after you finish the last objective is meant to destroy u. you respawn far off so you can exit easily.

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RogueEnterprise has already reviewed it and found a major visual bug that i cannot fix:

on lowest, high and highest (0, 2 and 3 thirds of quality bar, respectively) you get funky visuals which really look bad (caused by the sun -distant object on background- which i don't think you can remove)

therefore, i HIGHLY recommend you play this mission on 1/3 the quality slider bar, because only then it looks the way it's supposed to.

Plan to get most of my reviews up to date this weekend. Hopefully I can help with this problem. Have allot of experience with map backgrounds and effects.

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there's no way to rly fix it, it's a problem with game effects, not anything i set can change it

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I'm not even sure why you even choose the Fluidic Space effect for that map.

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... i didnt choose fluidic space effects for it, it's a GAME issue, NOT in my hands

IT LOOKS FINE on 1/3 quality slider bar, ask cryptic how high and highest looks worse than recommended. coz i have ABSOLUTELY no idea :>

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I respectfully submit for review:

TITLE : Bishop's Crook
AUTHOR : @Pi-3Orionis
CODE : ST-HLW67FOB5
LEVEL : 35+
LOCATION : Alpha Centauri Sector Block
LENGTH : Medium
TAGS : FED GRP (possibly SRP instead, see notes)
DESCRIPTION : A Starfleet ship with sealed orders and special modifications goes missing in the Neutral Zone. Can you find it before it is overtaken by enemies of the Federation? And who is really responsible for the calamity that befell the ship? This mission has two possible resolutions! (Part 1 of a three-part arc, but each mission is intended to be self-contained in scope.)
LINKS : None as of yet.

The main antagonist of this story arc is a character I roleplayed back in my days on Star Trek MU*s. I've updated his story to STO's setting and given him a new set of motivations. I'm also trying to stretch my creative muscles and make as full use of new Foundry features as I can, like "optional" interactions and dialog that changes based on the player's actions.

I didn't have a good way to test this, but there's a possibility that the puzzle mechanics force this mission to be SRP -- I had no practical way of testing it with a group to see if things malfunctioned with multiple players. At any rate, the dialog is written to accommodate multiple RPers.

Known issues: Besides the outstanding known issues with Foundry in general, the explosion that's supposed to accompany the destruction of the satellite won't go off when I play the mission. Other than that, all of the dialog and mission critical triggers seem to work.

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"Spawn of Medusa" By Duke-of-Rock
Title: Spawn of Medusa
Author: Duke-of-Rock
Code: ST-HCQTJBEGV
Level: Any Level
Location: Starting at Seedea System, Pi Canis Sector Block
Length: Approximately 1 hour
Tags: FED, SPACE, GROUND, COMBAT
Description: You are ordered to assist a Klingon acquaintance from a previous encounter and investigate a
new threat to the Quadrant and the Federation.


SYNOPSIS: On route to the Klingon border you receive a transmission from an old friend. A Klingon captain needs you help to rescue her ship, her crew as well as the Empire. It is your mission to save her and possibly the entire quadrant form a dangerous...
ANALYSIS: Spawn Of Medusa is one of the first help a friend missions created for foundry and as a pilot created before triggers it still holds it's own. Duke-of-Rock has been able to update this mission without losing it's original character. Back when simple design and basic stories were the 5 stars of foundry. This mission makes us realise that simple is sometimes best when creating a foundry mission, however this mission is far but simple. Exceptional designs and objective direction makes this one of my favourite classics next to Conjoined, Rise Of Darkness and Dead In Space. Even with current foundry bugs, this is one of the most bug free polished missions currently playable on Holodeck.
PROS: Great map design gives life to the story. Choose of maps and you direction on them makes this mission an exploration experience. Great groups of enemies for players who like a fast passed plot line. Tasks are not overwhelming and have a valid reason when advancing the plotline.
CONS: Once again foundry bugs were the only issues. Pathing of Boffs in Catacombs.
VERDICT: Can't wait to play the rest of the series. Have always visited these missions at various stages of development and this mission has me hoping to review the rest of the series. A perfect example of a good prelude to a crisis mission done by a professional with the foundry tool.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY – 4
TREK – 3
DESIGN – 4.5
DIFFICULTY – 2.5
GRIND – 2.5
OVERALL – 66
THOUGHTS:A prodigal Classic. This is a great STO mission. A couple of Pathing issues due to Foundry bugs, but otherwise excellent. |Gameplay 4|Trek 3|Difficulty 2.5|Grind 2.5|Design 4.5| Duke-of-Rock is an exceptional author.

*****/Stars

I hope to see the rest of the series in this thread. Would love to play the 1st one as well.

NOTES : Couple of Boff pathing issues in the catacombs, but doesn't effect gameplay. Wander might need tweaking on the planet surface.

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Hi Filbones,

Thanks for the review. I am humbled that you enjoyed the mission. At your request, here are the remaining episodes for your consideration. The remaining episodes each go their own direction while keeping with the story Arc. From the history of the Klingons involvement with the Medusik, to the need to seek out allies to fight the coming threat to the Galaxy. Part IV is my new favorite. I took it on a completely unexpected course for a discovery of Epic proportions. It is story heavy and combat light, but to cover the territory I breached, it required a good deal of explanation. I still enjoy putting a lot of time and effort into my map's scenery to make them visually pleasing and properly fitting the storyline. As I increased my foundry knowledge, I also was able to use shuttlecrafts in unique ways that you should like, as well as triggers and their uses. Each episode leads into the other, but have the ability to stand alone, with the intent of creating the player to desire to know what will happen next. I hope you enjoy the rest of the series as much as you did the pilot. Once again, thanks for reviewing it.
I am indeed honored. :)


Spawn of Medusa II - (Part II - Daughters of Medusa)

Part II is a strong story driven sequel to Spawn of Medusa. Learn more about the history of this new enemy to the alpha quadrant and beyond. Learn the truth of the Klingon link to the Medusik past.


* Level: 16+
* Mission time: Approx. 1 hour
* Medium Level Code-Driven Puzzles
* Space-Driven Battle
* Strong Storyline
* Unique Mission Within a Mission Objectives

Spawn of Medusa III - ( Part 3 - Break from Tradition )

With the Klingons losing ground to the Medusas and Medusa Hajora gaining ground in the outer edges of the Federation, Join Admiral Fedrikson on Sierra Outpost II and try to gain allies from a delegation of Federation enemies. The time to act is now or all may soon be lost.

*Level 16+
*Space and Ground Battles
*Prime Numbers Puzzle
*Dialogue Rich Storyline.

Spawn of Medusa IV - (Part IV - The Awakening)

"As you prepare for a scientific commission to join you on Julip Prime to study the ruins recently discovered, you are hailed by Admiral Fedrikson and ordered to immediately divert to the newly rebuilt Argus Array. It has been monitoring the Medusik's fleet movements and has stopped transmitting. Who and what you find will lead you on an unexpected adventure to solve one of Earth's greatest mysteries and prepare you for the final showdown rapidly approaching with a new ally against the evil Medusa Frow and her remaining 5 daughters."

*Level 16+
*Starting Location: Wall Console Outside Main Transporter Room on Earth Space Dock (ESD)..
*Mission Time: A little over an hour in length
*Heavy Story Driven Mission with Diplomatic Implications.
*Medium Difficulty Coded puzzle.
*Very Little Combat.
*Unique Maps and locations.

http://starbaseugc.com/index.php/uncategorized/spawn-of-medusa-iv-the-awakening/

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my mission has been polished to the max, the crappy looking effect is gone and it's about as good as it's gonna get so i hope for your review soon :P

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TITLE : The Ice Cube: Part Two
AUTHOR : Shrimp@simonecuttlefish
CODE : ST-HHIYHVGTK
LEVEL : Any Level
LOCATION : Wolf 359 Sirius Sector Block
LENGTH : Approx one hour
TAGS : FED
DESCRIPTION : What is your missions description?

The Ice Cube: Part Two (Ver 0.7 bugfix)

Leaves from Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block

You have climbed aboard an ancient Borg cube that you discovered frozen over 1000 meters below the surface of an ice planet. Something is very wrong here. Time to meet the locals, and risk your commission with Starfleet.

The insanity of part one is resolved, but things are about to become even more mysterious. Heavy storyline driven content, with major ground combat events toward the end.

Ingame Mission Accept Screen:

"The Ice Cube: Part Two"

Leaves from Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block

The insanity of part one is resolved, but things are about to become even more mysterious. Heavy storyline driven content, with a major ground combat mission toward the end.

Ratings Warning.
PD - psychological drama
NTH - no toilet humour
GV - gratuitous violence
FBS - flash back sequence
PMS - Psychotic Mother Sequence

Pre Release Review.

"Perhaps the pinnacle achievement of all gaming history, this magnificent jewel eclipses the very idea of computer based entertainment in a supernova of absolute genius. Breathtaking scenery, depth and sensitivity to the Star Trek universe makes this mission the ultimate ambrosia, the nectar of the Gods, and the supreme achievement of all human kind. Cryptic would be insane not to employ this mission author.

I would have given it six stars, but you are not allowed to officially review your own work."
By simonecuttlefish

Shrimp@simonecuttlefish


Additional Notes:
Part one was my very first attempt at making a mission. I started part one as a comedy mission, and this has seriously annoyed some players. Part two is serious with some strong elements of psychological drama. It starts with a brief synopsis of what has happened previously, and so is able to be played as an alternative starting point for this series if the players RP prevents them from having fun. :)

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I would like to submit the following missions for your review and consideration:

TITLE: Deadly Intentions - Part 1
AUTHOR: Sovereign77x
CODE: ST-HEINFDVMI
LEVEL: Any
LOCATION: Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block
LENGTH: Approximately 30 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS: FED
DESCRIPTION:
One of the most brilliant scientists in Federation has defected to the Klingon Empire, and he's taken some of the Federation's most classified and dangerous technology with him! You must stop him by whatever means necessary.

TITLE: Deadly Intentions - Part 2
AUTHOR: Sovereign77x
CODE: ST- HG3P4W905
LEVEL: Level 41+
LOCATION: Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block
LENGTH: Approximately 45 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS: FED
DESCRIPTION :
The two Klingon ships that escaped Dorzal Station with their deadly cargo must be found, and you quickly discover that Dr. Tasarg may not be the only scientist betraying the Federation. The true motives behind Dr. Tasarg's defection are revealed, and they are far deadlier than anyone could imagine.

TITLE: Deadly Intentions - Part 3
AUTHOR: Sovereign77x
CODE: ST- HTEOX3GQ3
LEVEL: Level 41+
LOCATION: Otha System in the Eta Eridani Sector Block
LENGTH: Approximately 30 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS: FED
DESCRIPTION :
Dr. Tasarg's genocidal plot is spiraling out of control, and the fate of the entire Alpha Quadrant is at stake. You must overcome impossible odds to prevent the unthinkable, and a terrible choice will have to be made.

Thank you for your willingness to do these reviews. I'm eager to hear your feedback and suggestions!

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Hi all,

It's been a tough end to the year. Had allot of breaks from STO this year due to personal responsibilities, but good news. I'm back. Well not exactly...

After Christmas I will be back in action playing your missions and doing articles over at StarbaseUGC.com. I'd like to thank everyone for there enthusiasm towards getting me back in the Foundry seat. So if you'd like to get in first and your not planning on doing any revisions till January please read the OP and submit your foundry missions. Anyone resubmitting a foundry mission I have not got around to yet, will get priority.

Other than that, Have a great Christmas and a Happy New year. I look forward to playing your missions.

Filbones

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I would like to re-submit the following for your review:

TITLE: Deadly Intentions - Part 1
AUTHOR: Sovereign77x
CODE: ST-HEINFDVMI
LEVEL: Any
LOCATION: Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block
LENGTH: Approximately 30 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS: FED
DESCRIPTION:
One of the most brilliant scientists in the Federation has defected to the Klingon Empire, and he's taken some of the Federation's most classified and dangerous technology with him! You must stop him by whatever means necessary.

TITLE: Deadly Intentions - Part 2
AUTHOR: Sovereign77x
CODE: ST- HG3P4W905
LEVEL: Level 41+
LOCATION: Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block
LENGTH: Approximately 45 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS: FED
DESCRIPTION :
The two Klingon ships that escaped Dorzal Station with their deadly cargo must be found, and you quickly discover that Dr. Tasarg may not be the only scientist betraying the Federation. The true motives behind Dr. Tasarg's defection are revealed, and they are far deadlier than anyone could imagine.

TITLE: Deadly Intentions - Part 3
AUTHOR: Sovereign77x
CODE: ST- HTEOX3GQ3
LEVEL: Level 41+
LOCATION: Otha System in the Eta Eridani Sector Block
LENGTH: Approximately 30 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS: FED
DESCRIPTION :
Dr. Tasarg's genocidal plot is spiraling out of control, and the fate of the entire Alpha Quadrant is at stake. You must overcome impossible odds to prevent the unthinkable, and a terrible choice will have to be made.


Thank you for your willingness to do these reviews. I'm eager to read your feedback and suggestions!

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Hey, filbones.

Submitted for your review is my newest mission. Hope you enjoy it. The mission criteria is as follows:

Name: Respect For Your Elders

Author: Capt.PFDennis

Project ID: ST-HB7T73XL4

Level: 31+

Location: Starfleet Academy-602 Club

Length: Approximately 1 hour

Tags: Holodeck, Fed, Solo RP, Space Combat, Ground Combat

Description: You are asked to aid in tracking down the granddaughter of a famous Starfleet Admiral who has gone missing. The Admiral is due to arrive for a visit within 24 hours. You have until then to get her back to Earth, but you become entangled in more than a manhunt along the way.

Links: http://starbaseugc.com/index.php/ugcmissions/capt-pfdennis-presents-respect-for-your-elders/ and trailer only http://youtu.be/aG2lMqxO3M0

This mission started with my intention to change it up a little from my usual, sometimes heavy handed themes. I had always tried to tackle some moral dilemma. For this one, I wanted to lighten it up with a less serious plot and dialogue. Everytime I went through the NPC Contact list, I came across Jeffrey Scharf, the Bartender at the 602. I just had to find a reason to use him, so I did, setting him up as the person everybody in Starfleet knows. I had originally intended on having the player travel from planet to planet until finding the girl, but that idea began to feel tedious. Since I was watching a lot of Enterprise, at the time, I really liked the idea of using the Vulcan Forge and knew that I could reproduce a reasonable facsimile with the available assets. That was the basis for the skewed storyline. This mission has nothing to prove, but to have fun and get a few chuckles out of it. I hope I succeeded.

Off hand, I can't think of any bugs or flaws except maybe the ability to sink some of the large rock formations on the Forge map sufficiently underground because of the extreme changes in terrain of the base map. I could have chosen a flatter base map, but it would not have come off nearly as well. I attempted all settings i.e. Zero Altitude, Terrain, Geometry at minus elevations, to no avail. I'm fairly certain, unless you're looking for it, that it is not overly obvious. I also would have liked to have NPC's disappear, but it's not possible without trickery, which I had to do. I figured no review I have received could be worse than landerx74's "Boring and Dull", so why not? :)

Thanks, filbones.

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Title:
Final Judgement

Project ID:
ST-HJT83IXL9

Description:
When a Cardassian Starfleet officer in the Badlands finds himself on the verge of unearthing the mystery behind the recent appearances of 40 year old Jem’Hadar fighters, you must come to his aid against not only the Undine but also a Starfleet inquisition that threatens to end his research.

Language: English

Faction: Federation

Location: The Badlands

Length: Variable. Doable in under half an hour. Loads of optional text.

Level: 46+

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Title:
Not Our War

Project ID:
ST-HJBWPEPE9

Description:
When Starfleet Command tasks you with investigating an anomaly in the Badlands, something goes horribly wrong that gets you and your crew involved in one of the bloodiest wars in the Alpha Quadrant's history! Its up to you and your crew to solve the situation, otherwise the entire Alpha Quadrant as you know it could be lost forever!

Language: English

Faction: Federation

Location: The Badlands

Length: 45 mins - 1 hr 1/2

Level: 31+

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Title: Breen Beachhead

Project ID: ST-HTYS7NDCI

Language: English

Faction: Starfleet

Level: 35+

Description: There have been numerous reports of Breen ships in Defera space recently, particularly around the Raveh system. Many ships, military and civilian, have been lost in the general area. Unconfirmed reports of heavy transports and warships in the area may be unfounded rumors--or not. Your job is to investigate these sightings and handle them accordingly.

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Hey Guys sorry I haven't got around to playing these yet. But will very soon.
Main reason is I have been having trouble Respecting and configuring new builds for my toons. There for I haven't been able to play Foundry content at high ranks. The other reason is I have been busy working in collaboration with members on how we can infuse foundry content with enthusiasm for ftp members. STO is going through major changes as well as the foundry community towards them. Finally also most of my STO play has been committed to my foundry Machinima Project webseries as it will probably be used as my main assessment for my CERT 4 in Screen and Media. Thank you for your patients and I promise the wait will be worth it as most of your missions will be probably highlighted in Foundry Community features.

Cheers
and remember STO is in our hands. It's up to us to keep it alive.

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“Deadly Intentions - Part 1” By Sovereign77x
TITLE : Deadly Intentions - Part 1
AUTHOR : Sovereign77x
CODE : ST-HEINFDVMI
LEVEL : Any
LOCATION : Wolf 359 in the Sirius Sector Block
LENGTH : Approximately 30 minutes on normal difficulty
TAGS : FED
DESCRIPTION : One of the most brilliant scientists in the Federation has defected to the Klingon Empire, and he's taken some of the Federation's most classified and dangerous technology with him! You must stop him by whatever means necessary.
LINKS : http://i1120.photobucket.com/albums/l485/Sovereign77x/DeadlyIntentionsBanner13.png

SYNOPSIS: A highly skilled Klingon scientist has mysteriously disappeared from Starfleet. Investigate this awol Klingon and chase his research across the galaxy while preventing it from falling into hands that may use it to change the balance of power throughout the galaxy.
ANALYSIS: This mission is simple with a complicated plot-line. Luckily most dialog is optional and you don't loose the objective of the mission by skipping any of it. The Author has taken allot of time to make sure you are directed properly. From information on how to interact with pop ups to instructions on how to skip puzzles or what objectives add more enemy NPC's. So much great direction that to a seasoned player, might be disgruntled about being taken away from the immersion, however understandable for the first mission of a series. Maps have great additions and details. So much that I thought I was still playing SW:TOR at one point. Once again pathing is the only design flaw with this mission.
PROS: Optional extras make for easy interaction with the story and objectives.
CONS: Enemy groups are too hard, especially when using a map with pathing issues.
VERDICT: A competent mission, however it doesn't hold it's own as just a prelude to a crisis. The mission isn't too long and believe playing the next one might be desirable for most players, however as a stand alone mission falls short and hinders on the potential of this well executed mission.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 3.5
TREK - 3
DESIGN - 3
DIFFICULTY - 4
GRIND – 3
OVERALL 66
THOUGHTS: Interesting prelude to a crisis. Foundry Bugs do let this mission down, but look forward to seeing this authors skill level and plot development over the next couple of missions.
****/Stars

I look forward to playing the rest of the series after I have reviewed some of these other missions..

NOTES : Had trouble contacting the Alexander. Think it might be the Story tool progression while already being inside the reach marker. Other wise known as the reach marker bug.

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“Respect For Your Elders” By Capt.PFDennis
TITLE : Respect For Your Elders
AUTHOR : Capt.PFDennis
CODE : ST-HB7T73XL4
LEVEL : 31+
LOCATION : Starfleet Academy-602 Club
LENGTH : Approximately 1 hour
TAGS : Holodeck, Fed, Solo RP, Space Combat, Ground Combat
DESCRIPTION : You are asked to aid in tracking down the granddaughter of a famous Starfleet Admiral who has gone missing. The Admiral is due to arrive for a visit within 24 hours. You have until then to get her back to Earth, but you become entangled in more than a manhunt along the way.
LINKS : http://starbaseugc.com/index.php/ugc...r-your-elders/ and trailer only http://youtu.be/aG2lMqxO3M0

SYNOPSIS: Chase a young attractive party girl half way across the quadrant. This young cadet has got her self into allot of trouble and you need to rescue her as well as secure a piace of valuable Vulcan heritage.
ANALYSIS: This mission is a silly one. Most enjoyable and well executed. As ridiculous as it may seem, there are many great elements and references to Trek Cannon to keep the plot thickening. Once again CaptPFDennis has out done himself with character development and easily executable objectives. Although dialog heavy, every bit is worthwhile. Well balanced combat as well as knowledge of Enemy NPC groups makes for great climactic battles.
PROS: Enjoyable humor makes for a refreshing playable mission. Maps are intriguing, pretty and environmentally immersible. Character familiarisation is consistent and helps you to become attached to the journey of each and every character.
CONS: If I was to find flaw in this mission, it would be the RPG elements and dialog heavy lingo, however as the style of this mission is set early it is hard to not enjoy these elements as a loyal foundry fanatic.
VERDICT: A must play for anyone looking to be re-motivated to play foundry missions. Reminiscent of the old beta silly missions, makes for a great nostalgic return to foundry being used by players for players to entertain and support Trek. This mission will have you wanting a squeal just to see the future of certain characters.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 4.5
TREK - 4
DESIGN - 3.5
DIFFICULTY - 2.5
GRIND – 2.5
OVERALL 68
THOUGHTS: Great fun entertaining mission. Refreshing to play a non serious mission. A must play on a rainy day. :p
*****/Stars

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Thanks for taking a look at my mission! Your feedback and suggestions were helpful. I look forward to your reviews of the other missions in my series.

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Thanks for the kind review, fil. It was a fun mission to make. I know that previous missions of mine could come out a bit heavy handed and dare I say, 'preachy" at times. lol. I am glad you enjoyed it and that the humor came through, even in the midst of a serious subplot. Guess I couldn't help myself. As for a sequel, well....you never know. I'm finding it difficult to make the time, but I have to get back to it. So many slots to use.:)

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TITLE : The Friend of My Enemy
AUTHOR : @greatpenguin
CODE : ST-HFXU7X5VX
LEVEL : 41+
LOCATION : Imaga system, Sirius sector
LENGTH : 30-60 minutes
TAGS : FED (...I'm not certain what other tags there might be)
DESCRIPTION : Unravel the secret behind a traitor within Starfleet.
LINKS : Erm... none yet.

... Go easy on me. It's my first time. http://z5.ifrm.com/5908/85/0/e5009769//e5009769.gif

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TITLE : Safeguards

AUTHOR : Attilio

CODE : ST-HABZJUAMV

LEVEL : 30

LOCATION : Kinjer System, Sirius Sector

LENGTH : Approximately 45 minutes. Possibly less if you skip through the dialog.

TAGS : FED, Diplomacy, Combat, Traveling to different sectors/systems, Mystery

DESCRIPTION : During a routine mission you uncover a plot to destroy the Federation. Lead the investigation in a mission which takes you across the known galaxy.

LINKS : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fJ9tRAuPxs

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“Final Judgement” By Leviathan99
TITLE : Final Judgement
AUTHOR : Leviathan99
CODE : ST-HJT83IXL9
LEVEL : 46+
LOCATION : The Badlands
LENGTH : Variable. Doable in under half an hour. Loads of optional text.
TAGS :
DESCRIPTION : When a Cardassian Starfleet officer in the Badlands finds himself on the verge of unearthing the mystery behind the recent appearances of 40 year old Jem’Hadar fighters, you must come to his aid against not only the Undine but also a Starfleet inquisition that threatens to end his research.
LINKS :

SYNOPSIS: It is hard to give a brief without giving away the surprises.
ANALYSIS: Leviathon99 always has a style to his missions. This new addition is no exception. The style consists of always bringing to life a unique story with immersion in which uses the foundry to create an experience not found in any other aspect of STO. This mission will have most veteran authors peeing there pants with excitement as well as jealousy. Leviathon99 is an expert at advance dialogs, it is unfortunate and cheeky that you have to play this mission more than once to understand the situations you are playing out.
PROS: Exceptional character development and interaction. Unique mission experience competently executed. New use of triggers never seen in other missions. An eye for detail towards map environment and direction.
CONS: Certain lighting effects where unnecessary and disturbed my enjoyment of the mission. At no point does this mission prepare it's audience for what there about to play. NPC Groups were a little to hard for my poor warn out old VA Science officer.
VERDICT: Brilliant!

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 3
TREK - 2.5
DESIGN - 5
DIFFICULTY - 3.5
GRIND – 2.5
OVERALL 66
THOUGHTS: Nothing but spectacular. Another epic experience from one of my favorite authors. A must play for all foundry authors and players looking for diplomatic missions or all-rounded game-play.

*****/Stars

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This really should of been submitted to this thread. Filbones Critical Analysis (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?p=3715135#post3715135)

“Not Our War” By Zondi
TITLE : Not Our War
B]AUTHOR :[/B] Zondi
CODE : ST-HJBWPEPE9
LEVEL : 31+
LOCATION : The Badlands
LENGTH : 45 mins - 1 hr 1/2
TAGS :
DESCRIPTION : When Starfleet Command tasks you with investigating an anomaly in the Badlands, something goes horribly wrong that gets you and your crew involved in one of the bloodiest wars in the Alpha Quadrant's history! Its up to you and your crew to solve the situation, otherwise the entire Alpha Quadrant as you know it could be lost forever!
LINKS :

SYNOPSIS: Investigate a wormhole and be thrown back in time to the dominion wars and work along side 7th fleet to return to your own dimension as well as prevent another from altering the past. A prelude to a crisis mission.
ANALYSIS: For a first mission this one is extraordinary. Still needs work and polish, but I do believe as the authors skill increases, so will the potential of this mission. Unfortunately due to the mission still needing more development I can't go into too much more detail other than the Cardassian dialog is great. If anything this author has probably captured kind of what I would like to see in Cryptics new DS9 series.
PROS: Excellent direction and balance towards story slash combat.
CONS: This mission has a couple of bugs. The spawn point trigger once already in it didn't work. There is more I'd like to go into, however only at the request of the author.
VERDICT: A great experience within a much loved period of trek. I look forward to see this author grow and play his future missions.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 2.5
TREK - 3
DESIGN - 3
DIFFICULTY - 2.5
GRIND – 4.5
OVERALL 62
THOUGHTS: A competent first mission with allot of potential. Some good cannon recreations in this mission for DS9. This author has a style to rival CaptPFDennis.

****/Stars

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TITLE : A enemy of my enemy Part one
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : ST-HGZB17P53
LEVEL : ANY
LOCATION : A few different locations
LENGTH : 20- 45 min
TAGS : non
DESCRIPTION :A klingon ally crosses into federation space to find a way to contact and bring in this powerful enemy into a battle aganist one of the most dangerous and powerful eenemy.

Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thank you.

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TITLE : A enemy of my enemy Part two
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : STHA5MRZZCC
LEVEL : ANY
LOCATION : A few different locations
LENGTH : 20- 45 min
TAGS : none
DESCRIPTION : As you continue to find out why the Nausicaans crossed into Federation space to gather information about the Borg and Species 8472. The question is why and how are they going to use the information.
Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thank you.

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“Breen Beachhead” By Gregg247
TITLE : Breen Beachhead
B]AUTHOR :[/B] Gregg247
CODE : ST-HTYS7NDCI
LEVEL : 35+
LOCATION : The Badlands
LENGTH : 45 mins - 1 hr 1/2
TAGS : Starfleet
DESCRIPTION : Description: There have been numerous reports of Breen ships in Defera space recently, particularly around the Raveh system. Many ships, military and civilian, have been lost in the general area. Unconfirmed reports of heavy transports and warships in the area may be unfounded rumors--or not. Your job is to investigate these sightings and handle them accordingly.
LINKS :

SYNOPSIS: Patrol a system and defend a planet against the Breen.
ANALYSIS: This mission has some really nice maps. The author knows the Breen NPC groups well and has balanced them enough to be a challenge, but not a hindrance. The story and plot is not overly complex and makes for an enjoyable stress free play through. I really enjoyed planing my next fight and this mission leaves plenty of room for tactics.
PROS: Visually stunning simple mission makes for a relaxing enjoyable Foundry mission.
CONS: Some Foundry build issues, but nothing that hinders on the gameplay.
VERDICT: Another great Author to add to my catalog of playable missions. He reminds me that simple sometimes creates a better foundry experience and Galactrix might have to make more missions before this guys steals his style.

RANKINGS
GAMEPLAY - 3
TREK - 1.5
DESIGN - 3.5
DIFFICULTY - 3
GRIND – 2
OVERALL 52
THOUGHTS: An enjoyable Patrol type mission with a great balance of combat and well detailed maps.

****/Stars

The overall score might be low because it doesn't tick all the boxes, but this is a worth while mission to play. Also Banner Present Here. (http://i223.photobucket.com/albums/dd314/filbones/Reviews%20UGC/BreenBeachheadByGregg247copy.jpg)

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Hurp derp.

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Reposting this from your other thread.

TITLE : The Friend of My Enemy
AUTHOR : @greatpenguin
CODE : ST-HFXU7X5VX
LEVEL : 41+
LOCATION : Imaga system, Sirius sector
LENGTH : 30-60 minutes
TAGS : FED
DESCRIPTION : Unravel the secret behind a traitor within Starfleet.
LINKS : N/A

Sorry I must have given you the wrong link. Never mind you can find your post here.
http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=3994208&postcount=19 In this thread http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?t=229261&page=2

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“Safeguards” By Attilio
TITLE : Safeguards
B]AUTHOR :[/B] Attilio
CODE : ST-HABZJUAMV
LEVEL : 30
LOCATION : Kinjer System, Sirius Sector
LENGTH : Approximately 45 minutes. Possibly less if you skip through the dialog.
TAGS : FED
DESCRIPTION : During a routine mission you uncover a plot to destroy the Federation. Lead the investigation in a mission which takes you across the known galaxy.
LINKS : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fJ9tRAuPxs

SYNOPSIS: Come on an adventure across the galaxy. Interact with the STO universe like never before seem in a foundry mission. A routine mission that takes you far beyond the stars.
ANALYSIS: A few to many Map Transitions for any foundry mission, but well worth it as you get to interact and visit so many known and not so known places. Enemy groups are great and fun to interact with as well as always advancing the plot-line. The story is quite simple, but the interaction and advancement within it is complex and long, making it feel slightly grindy for anyone not prepared to put in the time for this sort of mission. The scale and detail of maps also follows this philosophy and all though I dare not say it, I wish there was more environmental and custom map optional material. As a VA this mission is relatively easy. Transwarp is vital to this mission and is it's only down flaw. I would much like to see a prequel with the villains within this mission.
PROS: Great Custom maps and story board design.
CONS: To many Map Transitions.
VERDICT: An amazing mission filled with adventure and intrigue. Comfortable play and easy to follow directions makes this mission well sort after amongst the foundry community.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 3.5
TREK - 2
DESIGN - 4
DIFFICULTY - 2
GRIND – 4
OVERALL 62
THOUGHTS: OMG Yes! An adventure mission of epic proportions. Allot of map transitions, but worth it for the over all feeling of having been on an amazing journey.
*****/Stars

What were the wall banner space picture assets?

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filbones,

Thanks for the positive review, and for the banner! I'm glad you enjoyed playing the mission. This was my first Foundry mission, and I had a fun (and educational) time building it. I can't tell you how many times my Test Character died tweaking the mission difficulty -- I considered it a worthy sacrifice on his part. LOL

I hope you'll give my next missions a try and let me know what you think.

Thanks again!

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TITLE : We are back part one
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : STHMZAG8QUZ
LEVEL : 46+
LOCATION : A few different locations
TAGS : none
DESCRIPTION: Mission: The Borg have returned and so has Species 8472. Will the Federation and the Romulans be able to stop the Borg? Will the Alpha and Beta quardants fall to the Borg? Will Species 8472 leave our domain?
To Start this mission: You will need to go to the Sardah system in the Kassae sector in the Regulus sector block.

This is a part three of my story arch.

Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thanks

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TITLE : A Private Civil War
AUTHOR : Stylsy
CODE : ST-HJO29D6NI
LEVEL : Level 31
LOCATION : Earth Spacedock
LENGTH : 30 Minutes
TAGS : Fed, Space Combat, Ground Combat, Investigation, Diplomacy
DESCRIPTION : You are recalled to Earth Spacedock after one of your crew on shore leave is murdered. Evidence points to another one of your crew being responsible. As you investigate the murder, discover a wider conflict that threatens the stability of the Federation.
LINKS : http://starbaseugc.com/index.php/trailers/essential-viewing/a-private-civil-war/

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TITLE : We are back part two
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : ST-HNTVMFKJI
LEVEL : 41+
LOCATION : A few different locations
TAGS : none
DESCRIPTION: Mission: To stop the Borg threat. Can the Federation with the help from the Romulan's and from Species 8472 stop the Borg or will the Borg destroy them all and finally get the Alpha and Beta quadrants?
To Start this mission: You will need to go to the Sardah system in the Kassae sector in the Regulus sector block.

This is a part four of my story arch.

Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thanks

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Hey! Hope all is well. I just published a new mission and am hoping for some feedback and impressions. Anything you can provide will be great. Thanks for all you work reviewing people's work.

Here's the basic info:

Title: Checks and Balances
Author: mygod_itsfullofstars
Code: ST-HBB7S2UEL
Level: Any
Location: Defera system, Orellius Sector Block
Length: about 60 minutes (not totally sure of this one yet)
Tags: Fed, Gnd, Spc
Description: In the shadow of the Borg invasion of Defera, you are called on to protect the Preserver Archive at Lae’nas. When you arrive, however, you find a mystery that takes you beyond explored space and a threat that no one expected.

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The following missions have been moved here (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showpost.php?p=4035354&postcount=21).

TITLE : A enemy of my enemy Part one
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : ST-HGZB17P53
LEVEL : ANY
LOCATION : A few different locations
LENGTH : 20- 45 min
TAGS : non
DESCRIPTION :A klingon ally crosses into federation space to find a way to contact and bring in this powerful enemy into a battle aganist one of the most dangerous and powerful eenemy.

Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thank you.

TITLE : A enemy of my enemy Part two
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : STHA5MRZZCC
LEVEL : ANY
LOCATION : A few different locations
LENGTH : 20- 45 min
TAGS : none
DESCRIPTION : As you continue to find out why the Nausicaans crossed into Federation space to gather information about the Borg and Species 8472. The question is why and how are they going to use the information.
Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thank you.

TITLE : We are back part one
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : STHMZAG8QUZ
LEVEL : 46+
LOCATION : A few different locations
TAGS : none
DESCRIPTION: Mission: The Borg have returned and so has Species 8472. Will the Federation and the Romulans be able to stop the Borg? Will the Alpha and Beta quardants fall to the Borg? Will Species 8472 leave our domain?
To Start this mission: You will need to go to the Sardah system in the Kassae sector in the Regulus sector block.

This is a part three of my story arch.

Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thanks

TITLE : We are back part two
AUTHOR : logitech007
CODE : ST-HNTVMFKJI
LEVEL : 41+
LOCATION : A few different locations
TAGS : none
DESCRIPTION: Mission: To stop the Borg threat. Can the Federation with the help from the Romulan's and from Species 8472 stop the Borg or will the Borg destroy them all and finally get the Alpha and Beta quadrants?
To Start this mission: You will need to go to the Sardah system in the Kassae sector in the Regulus sector block.

This is a part four of my story arch.

Note: After you have played this mission, please feel free to send me a mail in the game @logitech007.
Im looking for some feedback.

Thanks

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“A Private Civil War” By Stylsy
TITLE : A Private Civil War
B]AUTHOR :[/B] Stylsy
CODE : ST-HJO29D6NI
LEVEL : Level 31
LOCATION : Earth Spacedock
LENGTH : 30 Minutes
TAGS : Fed, Space Combat, Ground Combat, Investigation, Diplomacy
DESCRIPTION : You are recalled to Earth Spacedock after one of your crew on shore leave is murdered. Evidence points to another one of your crew being responsible. As you investigate the murder, discover a wider conflict that threatens the stability of the Federation.
LINKS : http://starbaseugc.com/index.php/tra...ate-civil-war/

SYNOPSIS: Investigate the death of an officer and uncover the mysteries towards his murderers disappearance.
ANALYSIS: This is exceptionally fun. Call me Poirot. The mechanics have been keep-ed simple, but make for intriguing gamplay as they are disguised as being quite complex. Dialog is worthwhile and offers hints to future puzzles in which you don't even realise you have memorised. Characters are interactive and make for a comfortable mission as the dialog is not forced. Every map has something unique and not used in any other foundry mission to date. Very original in concepts and is not a carbon copy of any cryptic content which is refreshing. All combat is crucial to the story and adds to the pace of the mission.
PROS: Excellent immersion and simple to follow plotline. Characters are easy to connect with and add depth to the story with every bit of dialog. Direction is probably the best thing about this mission as you hardly find yourself looking at the objectives list.
CONS: Ground combat is hard to manage due to tight spaces and threat distance of NPC groups. Last map is difficult to navigate as it has no planets or stars to reference.
VERDICT: A simple plot line with great story dialog. Great pace and length of the mission make for an overall easy play through.

RANKINGS
GAMPLAY - 4
TREK - 3
DESIGN - 3
DIFFICULTY – 2
GRIND – 1
OVERALL 52
THOUGHTS: A great fun quick foundry mission. Gameplay 4 Trek 3 Difficulty 2 Design 2.5 Grind 1. Well executed simplistic story. Really enjoyed.
****/Stars

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Thanks for the review, glad you liked it. :)

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review coming soon.
Hey! Hope all is well. I just published a new mission and am hoping for some feedback and impressions. Anything you can provide will be great. Thanks for all you work reviewing people's work.

Here's the basic info:

Title: Checks and Balances
Author: mygod_itsfullofstars
Code: ST-HBB7S2UEL
Level: Any
Location: Defera system, Orellius Sector Block
Length: about 60 minutes (not totally sure of this one yet)
Tags: Fed, Gnd, Spc
Description: In the shadow of the Borg invasion of Defera, you are called on to protect the Preserver Archive at Lae’nas. When you arrive, however, you find a mystery that takes you beyond explored space and a threat that no one expected.

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Hi guys,

Due to so many new missions and obligations This thread is no longer accepting new missions. I would like to dedicate more time to helping new Foundry Authors. So head over to Filbones Critical Analysis (http://forums.startrekonline.com/showthread.php?p=3715135#post3715135) thread or subscribe and I'll let you know when I am accepting polished missions again. Thank you all for the support and good luck.

Filbones