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Archived Post 03-14-2011 11:41 PM

Filbones Reviews your missions. - OP BETA
 
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I will no longer be checking this thread. The beta Filbones Reviews thread has been moved now foundry is functioning and now fully implemented on Holodeck.

Filbones Reviews

Filbones Critical Analysis
Would you like a critical analysis of your mission?


I write down my thoughts as I play your mission as well as share ideas and foundry techniques you might not have considered.

Please do not ask me to play your mission if you have a polished product. I'm looking for new authors or missions that need feedback to improve the/there project.

By submitting your mission, your giving me permission to design banners, posters or trailers to promote your mission, as well as post reviews, spotlights or recommendations for your missions.

This is done voluntary and I do not promise to promote or review your mission.

Missions will only be played if you have filled out the details bellow.

TITLE :
What is your mission called?
AUTHOR : What is your STO Nick?
CODE : What is the Mission Code?
LEVEL : What level do I have to be to play?
LOCATION : Where does the mission start?
LENGTH : How long does it take to play approximately?
TAGS : What are the tags of your mission? Please Include FED or KDF
DESCRIPTION : What is your missions description?
LINKS : youtube, photobucket, StarbaseUGC.com or FoundryMissions.com etc...

JUNE/JULY MISSION REVIEWS



I will get around to playing all of these in good time and hope you have all found a wonderful audience as well as learned many new skills. I however need to start with a new Slate.

New Missions Start At the Bottom of this page...

Archived Post 03-15-2011 07:00 AM

Please Review - Health of the Crew
 
1st in :)

ST-TDSWQO52S
Health of the Crew

Archived Post 03-15-2011 03:00 PM

Please review my mission Project Revava. It's on Tribble now and you need a Lv41+ test character to view it. Thanks. :D

Archived Post 03-15-2011 03:02 PM

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Originally Posted by LordOfPit (Post 3433010)
Please review my mission Project Revava. It's on Tribble now and you need a Lv41+ test character to view it. Thanks. :D

Wow, that sounds awesome. I cant wait to play later this evening :)

Archived Post 03-15-2011 03:10 PM

Hopefully I can start reviewing more missions too next week. Too much work at work right now.

My mission is 'Maquis Arisen' ST-TMDVON7Z3

Be as critical as you can, it'll help a lot when it comes to doing yet another update on it.
Thanks in advance!

Archived Post 03-15-2011 03:37 PM

Hi,

First off, thanks for taking the time to review Foundry missions. It's a generous use of your time.

I've take nan extended leave of absence from the Foundry, but have a little more time now and hope I can join you doing some reviewing.

In the meantime, I'd appreciate any thought you have on the last mission I made:

ST-TMB6GQFWV
What Are Little Ferengi Made Of

Thanks again, and take care

Archived Post 03-16-2011 08:50 AM

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Originally Posted by filbones (Post 3431343)
Please no more missions Until I sort my new Reviewing System.

Hi all,

So some of you out there have called on my experience's to review and give feedback for missions. Unfortunately I can't keep up with all the different sprook threads on the forum. If you would like me to review your mission, place a post with the title and ID number in a reply. Please do not post a complete series. I will only do one mission per author at a time. I will post the feedback in this thread. If you don't want your feedback public please indicate so and I can create a google doc for you to collect any-time I'm in the starbase ugc chat room. . I am very critical and give my thoughts of the top of my head while I play. I will not get upset if you do not change things I'm not happy with or suggestions. All authors seek a response and that is what I'm here to deliver. Some missions I may request to Review, here are a couple I have done...

MISSION REVIEW : DEFIANCE AUTHOR : CHADDY18

MISSION REVIEW : MONOLITH AUTHOR : HAVRAHA

I do not like grind or massive amounts of text without a good story, and will accept missions at any stage of development.

Current date 1/31/11 - 4:26pm
Will be away from 16th of April - 2nd of May.


Please Label missions as Tribble or Holodeck from now on.

HOLODECK
43. Unholya Alliances I v2.0 ST-HTFDM6OH -PM Review Soridem
35 Decimation I BY Jyril
36 "Every Second Counts" By Bracknell
37. “Market Crash”
38. Conjoined (ST-HJAAWDWF8)
39. "Resting Raptors" ST-HA89GN3CF
40. “Draconis Rising“ ID: ST-HB3O66ZSJ
41. “The Regula Incident” ID: ST-HBL347FNT
42. “Genesis Craze” Part 1/4
44. “Sleeper.” ID ST-HT3JO2PGH
45. “Peace is Weak”
46. “Shades of Grey”- Check this one out. Saw it in early development and it rocks.
47. "The Mirror of My Ally..." ST-HHROUR4WM By Zadama
49. "Of Minds and Men" ST-HBF3QVJTL by NecroBones
50. Victims of the Ice ID: ST-HQ0DIH2D4 By P_Sutherland
51. The "True" Way ST-HIGZPYFJ9 By CardassianNinja
52 Inception of Deception ID: ST-HRRZXD9NC By MrJohnnyX
53. Retribution Part 1ID: ST-HLDNJWCK8 By Author: Rejak
54. "The Gemini Effect, Part 1" ID: ST-HHC5GB8ZT By Gryphoner
(-) "Death by a Thousand Paper Cuts" ST-HODKC3CNY By NecroBones
(-) "The Gemini Effect, Part 2" ID: ST-HOUAG8TYP By Gryphoner

TRIBBLE
23. The Snake Reincarnate 3: ST-TC8PKJ3WY
18. "Portents of the Forefathers" ST-TCJC4C5YD
32 “Miracle Worker" By silverbreez
19. The Orb Of the Profits 2 ST-TKDHDQ6RY
24. Scavenger Investigationv1.1
25. Scavenger Mining
26. Collective Assault v1.1

KDF HOLODECK
17. Title : Stirring the hornets nest
48. Defend the Empire! ST-HEP22MMEG By Elkysium
My klingon Character sucks so probabley best going over to Oouie's thread.
No More Tribble Missions Please, other than new Authors.

MY CURRENT TOP FIVE
1 "Dead In Space" By Outllaw
2 "Shades of Grey"
3 "Saving The 4th Fleet"
4. "Battle at Tazi VI" ST-HQEQLWMHG By Ripley

Tribble
1 "Rise Of Darkness"
2 "What Are Little Ferengi Made Of" mygod_itsfullofstars
3 'Defiance' Chaddy18
4 Conjoined ST-TIAF6XVNKReview
5 Marquis Arssen
6 'MONOLITH' Havraha

Recommendations
'Rise Of Darkness' - Shinji
'Fek'ihiri Invasion' - Shinji, Enra & JJ
'The Worst of All Worlds'. - Shinji
'Legacy Eps 1' By DLRaven
“We Will Not Wander More” by TheCentipede.
Brains Before Bounty(by Dixonium)

Do's
Put mission location in the mission description.
Start your mission near a social Zone transwarp.
Use Objectives to Indicate to the player what to do.
Make every mission stand on it's own. [Like a Pilot]

Don't s
Make your first mission a Story arc.
Have a battle while spawning after a map transition.
Use artistic creativity with generic STO Implements.
Use Wander for NPC that are Interact with Contact Objectives.
Give away the next objectives reason in Dialogues before the player interacts with it.

Reviews To Be Used As A research Mechanic For Foundry Authors.
Not to Be used in Playable Judgement.


Holodeck Missions
Chronotons and Klingons
Dead In SPace By Outllaw
The First Step
"Andorian Abduction" ID ST-HET8J7237
Starship Experimentation v1.1By Bazag
Trembler by Commadore_Bob

Tribble Missions
For Every Action" By Bazag
The Orb Provides - Parts I ST-TH4Q4FTAD review
The Snake Reincarnate I review

Conjoined ST-TIAF6XVNKReview
Facility of Fools Review
' Imperfect Reflections' ST-TKYAGZOOF
'Cloudy Intentions' ST-TKME7HJSO
'Resting Raptors' ST-TTGEV6PRZ
'Liars, and Tribbles, and Borg.' ID: ST-TUIPC8ISA
What Are Little Ferengi Made Of' ST-TMB6GQFWV
Health of the Crew ST-TDSWQO52S
Project Revava.
'Maquis Arisen' ST-TMDVON7Z3
Dissention. Part 1 - Walking in the air
Digging In The Past

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Originally Posted by razoreye2005 (Post 3431678)
1st in :)

ST-TDSWQO52S
Health of the Crew

Okay here you go dude.
ST-TDSWQO52S
Health of the Crew
Razoreye2005
Review


Still needs allot of work. If your a first time user of foundry, very impressive.
Currently not worth the play, but has allot of potential. I'd like to come back to this mission once remastered and it's been tweaked allot. Hook me up in a fort night for another play.

{OTHERS}To the person Who sent me a PM, I started reading your message and then was going to come back to it, but think I deleted it during game-play accidentally. Please send your name and mission through again it sounded intriguing.

Archived Post 03-16-2011 10:06 AM

Hi, if you haven't had a chance to check it out yet, can you please review the following:

Mission: Liars, and Tribbles, and Borg...
Project ID: ST-TUIPC8ISA

It's my first mission and I would like to know if the dialog problem I was having is affecting more people. Thanks.

Archived Post 03-16-2011 10:14 AM

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Originally Posted by LordOfPit (Post 3433010)
Please review my mission Project Revava. It's on Tribble now and you need a Lv41+ test character to view it. Thanks. :D

Project Revava.
Lord Of Pit
Review


Very captivating mission. Except for the amount of reading.
Worth the play.
Will play again.
Posted review at StarbaseUGC chat room, happy to post it here if you want.

OTHERS Current Play Order
will play within 24hours
  1. 'Maquis Arisen' ST-TMDVON7Z3
  2. 'What Are Little Ferengi Made Of' ST-TMB6GQFWV
    will play within 48hours
  3. 'Liars, and Tribbles, and Borg.' ID: ST-TUIPC8ISA

Archived Post 03-16-2011 10:56 AM

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Originally Posted by filbones (Post 3434309)
Okay here you go dude.
ST-TDSWQO52S
Health of the Crew
Razoreye2005
Review


Still needs allot of work. If your a first time user of foundry, very impressive.
Currently not worth the play, but has allot of potential. I'd like to come back to this mission once remastered and it's been tweaked allot. Hook me up in a fort night for another play.


Thanks. It was an early mission first drafted when the Foundry went live. I'm going to look at your feedback and certainly make some amends.


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