Argus Array Sabotage Daily
I am proud to announce I have published my first KDF mission. It is just a quick daily mission
utilizing the Argus Array from my Spawn of Medusa series, but it is quick and is a lot of fun (in my humble opinion). It is the "mirror" to my Federation "Argus Array Repair Daily" mission. Great to add into your Officer Reports daily Queue.
Title: Argus Array Sabotage Daily
Level: Any level
"The Empire has given you the mission to sabotage one of Starfleets most prized technological possessions. You are ordered to defeat any defense and beam aboard the maintenance core of the Array and sabotage it. Victory to the Empire!"
I hope you give it a try. Qapla! :)
Gotta love the Argus Array! Always causing problems! :D
Mission Critique Report - Argus Array Sabotage Daily
Project ID: ST-HAKUYY9KY
Summary: This is a short but great mission. The map designs and battles are good. The story dialogue is excellent and even though it was a short mission it was a lot of fun. I would highly recommend this mission to anyone who likes great map design, good battles and excellent supporting story dialogue. I really enjoyed it.
Below are a couple of things I noted while playing the mission that I wanted to let you know about. Everything in this write up should be seen as suggestions on ways I felt you could improve certain elements of the mission. They are yours to do with as you see fit.
Mission Description: This is detailed description but contains very little about the mission. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description. I noted one item to consider changing:
-Consider changing the description around and adding more actual mission details.
Grant Mission Dialogue: This is a good grant dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-Consider changing "QaPla [Rank]" to read "Qapla' [Rank]".
Mission Task: Despite the fact that you indicate the start location in the description consider adding the location of the entry point to the first custom map to the initial mission task. I noted no spelling errors with this task.
Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt.
Argus Array: This is a good map design with a nice battle and well written dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The post battle dialogue; consider changing "Of course your supreme tactics made the battle easy" to read "Of course your superior tactics made the battle easy".
Argus Array Maintenance Core: This is a great map design with a nice battle and well written dialogue. The explosion effects are very well done. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The map transfer dialogue NPC appears to be one of my ship BOFFs but is speaking as if with the away team.
Damaged Argus Array: This is a good map design with well written story dialogue that serves to wrap up the mission. I did like the evil laugh too. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.
Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. Yet another find mission brought to you by Duke-of-Rock. As always I look forward to playing/reviewing more of your work in the future.
This critique report also filed 05/27/2012 on forum posting for: In depth mission reports upon request.
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