Literary Challenge #32 Discussion Thread
 

This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #32 : Into the Hive, Part II.
We also have an Index of previous challenges HERE.

Feel free to link directly to the entry you are commenting on. And please remember: we're not here to tear each other up. Do not troll your fellow Captains, give feedback! Let the others know what you liked and disliked. Maybe they can even go back then and tweak their entries!

Let's get those creative juices flowing! :cool:

be gentle :P
 

Here is my continuation.

As usual, feedback/critique appreciated. References galore :)

As my descriptive abilities fail me, here are images of the weapons used

Alt

Weiss

Trombe

Double G unit 1

RV

It was a bit of a long one but hopefully it's enjoyable. It's from the perspective of one of my alts bridge officers about my main during the mission. Please feel free to leave me feed back on what you think.

I forgot about part 1. But I have the perfect entry for part 2.

Grylak, that is genius. Pure and utter genius. Well done :D

Thank you. I long for the days when a single Borg Cube could be 78% destroyed and still beat the living crap out of everything in it's path without breaking a sweat. This is my small contribution towards restoring their true status quo.


Also.... what if the Borg used cloaking devices.....

If anyone was reading mine, it is now finished.

Sorry, it's a bit long, but I got carried away :)

You know, Borg using cloaking technology would be unstoppable. *points to the idea for the devs* :D

Well... Not gonna say much about it, if anybody cares to read it, please do so. Link.

As I mentioned in the other thread, "Wow!". Your entries were really good and I am proud of y'all :) Looking forward to seeing what you come up with for the next challenge.

If you would still like to discuss #32, feel free to do so, but I'm going to unstick it as I prepare to post the next discussion thread.

Cheers,

Brandon =/\=