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pwebranflakes 01-07-2014 06:02 PM

Literary Challenge #56 Discussion Thread
 
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Literary Challenge #56 : Academy Teachings

This is the comments thread for Literary Challenge #56 : Academy Teachings.
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Let's get those creative juices flowing! :cool:

jonsills 01-07-2014 06:41 PM

I've already got a few ideas percolating... :)

zidanetribal 01-07-2014 07:00 PM

New character introduction time! *wrestles prompt to fit narrative*

takeshi6 01-07-2014 07:33 PM

Interesting.

Might need to write a Nanoha entry for this one, or possibly an entry from another character, not sure - I'll see if I can come up with anything decent. :cool:

marcusdkane 01-07-2014 08:06 PM

This could be interesting... :cool:

marcusdkane 01-07-2014 08:18 PM

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Originally Posted by takeshi6 (Post 14393421)
Interesting.

Might need to write a Nanoha entry for this one, or possibly an entry from another character, not sure - I'll see if I can come up with anything decent. :cool:

Given the trouble Nahona-San is in with Admiral ch'Harrell, I'm not sure if Command would invite her to give a graduation speech ;) :D Looking forward to what you come up with :cool:

ironphoenix113 01-07-2014 08:47 PM

Ooooh...Bryan is going to have a field day with those cadets :cool:

jonsills 01-08-2014 02:14 AM

Grunt delivers a lecture on a topic most Starfleet personnel are smugly certain they already know perfectly. Spoiler: They're wrong a lot.

grylak 01-08-2014 02:31 AM

I got nothing for this.


I'm liking both entries so far. The Nemesis Unit is an interesting character. I'm not sure how I feel about the genre savvy-ness, but I applaud your taking teh risk with the character in these. I see those as more of a satire on the franchise more than actually being part of it, in the same way the Galaxy Quest film is.


And Grunt makes some truly excellent points.

marcusdkane 01-08-2014 03:55 AM

@ worffan101: A fun piece, but my thoughts about the Nemesis unit are as before... You're clearly a good writer, but using such a character, IMHO, is like Babe Ruth tieing a hand behind his back, putting a patch over one eye, and only hitting a bunt...

@ jonsills: That was pretty much the speech I was thinking of, I should've expected nothing less of Grunt :D


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