Literary Challenge #42 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
05-21-2013, 08:11 PM
I finally figured out a way to write myself out of the corner that I put myself in for Nahash's second entry.
Here is the third entry in his story.
I am criminally behind in reading other people's entries.
- welcome to the literary challenges. Starting from scratch on an unknown planet is an interesting idea. One suggestion - I recommend working on the fourth paragraph ("If fate had been merciful..."). It doesn't flow all that well.
More comments on other people's entries are forthcoming hopefully.