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Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 769
# 14
06-07-2013, 11:38 AM
Forgive me for butting in. I like all of your stories personally. Just, I have noticed that some of them have very hard endings, you hit the climax and then just stop. ABW really did that with the Herdthinner arc. If you had added just one more part to that story, it would have flowed better.

Personally, and this is just me, and I really hope you don't take it personally, I felt that the two stories in ABW could have been split, aside from the camp scene, they don't intesect with each other at all.

Other than that, great stories, I love them all. I am curious if you set out to make Sa'ana a Princess Bride reference, or if that just happened. Either way, I like it.
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