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Join Date: Sep 2012
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# 64
10-12-2013, 01:26 PM
Best chapter yet, in my opinion. More, maestro!

Possible typo:

can't help but wonder what choices he had. [since "he" is the dead Feresan, wouldn't "he'd had" or "he had had" be more grammatical?]