Thread: Heresy (story)
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Join Date: Sep 2012
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# 7
12-08-2013, 08:01 AM
Another story from you, Shevet? And with at least three of the characters from "Fallout"? Yes, and more please! (Reminds self to copy "chapters" of this story to computer's hard drive.)

Also, I found a couple typos. One in #3: but I didn't get used to in in four years (I think the first "in" should be "it"). And one in #4: The dust in the air ? Vonot and T'Zen need clean air (the ? probably should be a dash). Sorry bout that. It's the spellchecker in my head. (Reminds spellchecker to be less fussy about spelling/punctuation.)

Last edited by philipclayberg; 12-08-2013 at 08:07 AM.