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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 9
02-18-2010, 07:00 AM
Originally Posted by USSZenica
This looks ok to you? as in it reads correctly?

Typo Two enlarged
I don't know how I missed "than" when it should be "that" but you had circled "profession" which is the correct spelling, that's what I was pointing out. As others have pointed out the rest (aside from "than") is grammatically incorrect but it makes sense.