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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 8
01-17-2011, 09:43 AM
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Originally Posted by LordDave View Post
I'm going to assume English isn't your first language so if you need help with the grammar please post it here and the forum will be happy to help. The review I made did not take grammar into consideration.

Now...

The first thing I noticed is ...
I'm curious to check out your missions and their content. They must be so much better.