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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
The Q Sphere - Episode 1 and 2 are published and polished a little more

Changes

Mostly I corrected grammer errors in Episode 2.
I added more out of character speech to add to the overall story
I think i tweaked the Klingons hangning around in Drozana so they aren't just robots
I added branching dialogue to the confrontation with Klingon captain Natak, chose to either be diplomatic, bluff about a new weapon system you have, or just be hostile.


Please check it out. I like reading those comments good or bad