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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 6
04-02-2011, 10:40 AM
Thanks for the review.

I managed to find and play part 1 of your mission. Good story and I like good stories. I left a few things in the review but wanted to throw out one thing here.

Gorn on P'Jem, considering how close it is to earth and vulcan, should have triggered every alarm in the quadrant. Some creative explanation might be in order. Other wise good job.