Thread: Andoria Prime
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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 3
04-04-2011, 10:39 PM
Thanks for your great review!
And I don't mean great because it's positive, which is nice too, but because it's very useful feedback.

I always try to double-check for typos, but they happen. Especially when English is your second language.
So I'm open to suggestions to improve the grammar, but I realize that would be a lot of work for a reviewer who just wants to play an interesting mission.

I'm also aware that the outcome was quite predictable - but that is partially intended. I wanted to do this story in about 3 parts (we will see if that happens. The next part probably won't come for a while because I'll need the Andorian ship for that - so it's up to you, Cryptic!), and I can assure you that the mystery will increase.

Not everyone is who they seem to be.

Thanks again!