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Join Date: Dec 2007
04-07-2011, 03:07 PM
Name:- The Enemy of the Enemy - By HathorSC
The Federation plans to annex an M Class planet in the Neutral Zone, although close to enemy lines. The Federation annexing this prime location threatens The Empire. Besides a strategic location, the crew must determine if this planet has things to profit from.
The only plotline was go to the planet and defend the locals only to find out they wanted the best out of any faction. was weak.
you didnt do to bad with the environments. a few more tthings possibly could boost it up but great
felt like an exploit fed NPC group mission. it was kill 4 things, story, kill 4 things, story, kill 2 things then another last boss. was boring but it do accept it is the Neutral Zone so i gave you 2 stars
the OCC command was uncessary throughout the dialogue's, you dont need it
. there were spelling errors and mistakes but there was hardly any dialogue at all so expanding upon this story could be a LOT more beneficial.
i alsio fund pop up dialogues with the same character arguing with himself. try to clean up the costume schedules
It is your first mission I know but a lot more story could have been put into it. it is the Neutral Zone so combat is expected but I found too much. improving these areas of your mission will lead to a much better review