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Join Date: Dec 2007
04-10-2011, 06:09 AM
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I would really like some feedback on my missions "arrayed againt you" 1 and 2. Part 1 was my first try at making a mission and I think it seems kinda thrown together. Part 2 I think is pretty good, not 5 star good, but pretty good none the less. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Just giving part one a whirl now.
Gave Part 1 a rating of 3/5. It really needs more in the way of exposition - I need to know *what* I'm doing, because it feels like I'm just going through room 1 to 2 to 3 for its own sake. Also, the "scan" interacts were very hard to find. That said, I don't think it would take much to bring this up to a 4/5.