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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 15
04-14-2011, 02:16 PM
Thanks for the review. I discovered the issue with the Ambassador Picard line was that I reached the cap for a dialogue size when adding that paragraph. That's been fixed.

The Borg have been moved further from the contact in the first part.

I nixed the double use of the word "assist", also, and clarified the ending.

I also moved Holloway further into the holodeck out of concern that AoEs were killing him since someone reported that he doesn't spawn sometimes.