Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 148
Thanks for the review. I discovered the issue with the Ambassador Picard line was that I reached the cap for a dialogue size when adding that paragraph. That's been fixed.
The Borg have been moved further from the contact in the first part.
I nixed the double use of the word "assist", also, and clarified the ending.
I also moved Holloway further into the holodeck out of concern that AoEs were killing him since someone reported that he doesn't spawn sometimes.
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