AMAZING concept for Foundry series
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Join Date: Dec 2007
04-25-2011, 03:09 PM
Well, thanks for sharing (I've missed your pop-culture/scifi posts) but that was ghastly (and when the main character was revealed to be named "Kirk" (related or not), I groaned out loud). It read like the outline for some Mary Sue fanfic. Did Shatner have a hand in this (I kid, sort of...)?
It's so far removed from Trek IMO that the writer should rewrite it to remove all the Trek references (rename all the aliens, etc) and just pitch it as a new scifi series (to be honest, as written, it feels like it WAS a new scifi series, but someone told the writer he should just shoehorn it into Trek mythology for an easier sell).