I enjoyed it to, had fun and gave it 4 stars. There were really only two things that put me off it.

1. There didn't seem to be an explanation for how Starfleet had managed to get so far into Klingon territory without detection and interception.
   
   
2. The use of transwarp to get to Qo'noS, which I thought was unnecessary and there didn't seem to be any need for it with Qo'noS being relatively close.

Other than that, the only other thing I can suggest is that you copy all dialog to a word document. Which means it's backed up and this will also make it easier for you to spell check.

Thanks for the mission recommendation, I liked the characters and look forward to the next part. Keep me updated!