Version 1.2 now published.

• Fixed several grammatical errors
• Removed need to start and end at ESD for mission completion
• Added a respawn point near the final ground battle
• Reduced the number of Talarian Hook Spiders (but not by much)

To do list:

• Add "living" dialog to some ground inhabitants
• Edit extra dialog to be "optional" reading

Thank you for the reviews thus far! Please keep them coming.