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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 16
06-21-2011, 07:05 PM
Nice mission, if a little heavy on the exposition side.
After that it has a nice pace, and not too much filler-fluff flying.
Nice mix of space and ground combat too, with a nice big ending.
Good stuff.

Two nitpicks: "At least we learned some something" <-- extra "some", was in one of the texts on the bridge of the Exeter.
And the other one is quite common, the missing comma before the adress of the player.
"I owe you one Captain Jalax" is not the same as "I owe you one, Captain Jalax"
But like I said, those are nitpicks, and not too detriment to the overall enjoyment of the episode.

But I have to admit, I have yet to get into the foundry, so my talk is cheap indeed.
At any rate, Seancy8512, I'm looking forward to playing more foundry missions by you!