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Join Date: Dec 2007
06-22-2011, 12:37 PM
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Two nitpicks: "At least we learned some something" <-- extra "some", was in one of the texts on the bridge of the Exeter.
And the other one is quite common, the missing comma before the adress of the player.
"I owe you one Captain Jalax" is not the same as "I owe you one, Captain Jalax"
But like I said, those are nitpicks, and not too detriment to the overall enjoyment of the episode.
But I have to admit, I have yet to get into the foundry, so my talk is cheap indeed.
At any rate, Seancy8512, I'm looking forward to playing more foundry missions by you!
Thank you! People were telling me I had some grammar mistakes and such in there, but it's a daunting task to go through and find them. I always try to proof-read - I'm a writer by trade - but the Foundry doesn't make it easy because you have to go through it dialog box by dialog box. Even so, I'll still miss some from time to time.
If it's cool with you I'd like to friend you and anyone else that wouldn't mind playing through some of my missions, to help with those mistakes. I have about 3 missions I'm working on now, and about 3 more on the back burner. I hope to have the first of the three published into the foundry by Friday.