New Mission, A Pun to Farr
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Join Date: Dec 2007
08-09-2011, 08:13 AM
Thank you for your comments, I have just gone and Edited about 90% of the text including your "Human" comment steel, if there are still spelling grammar errors i would appreciate it if you would Note them down and tell me where they are so i can go fix as soon as possible. Soon will be working on an updated version with no map transitions from Engineering to sickbay and a real holodeck . There are Also plans to do a follow up dealing with Vorik and his decision to keep his Holographic sex slave.
@Lee_anthonyIV - if you are reading this i appreciate your comments you are right in the episode "Blood Fever" that this is partially based on Ensign Vorik is not cured by the Doctors Holographic treatment however in the episode "body and soul" Tom paris is able to create a holographic duplicate of Tuvok's wife to treat his Pon Farr which he is telling people is "tarkelian flu"