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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 13
08-10-2011, 03:58 PM
Another really good one.

I hate to be nitpicky, it's a pet peeve of mine when I catch myself doing it:
Soriedem entered the conference room, walked over to his seat at the head of the conference table,
Try to avoid repeats when you write. Some readers, myself one of them, feel like they are tripping over words, skipped somewhere or slipped a line when these happen.