I wrote a second part of what must be something I've put too much thought into, I'm going to write a third part later, writing this much when your thinking it as you go along has burnt me out and I need a while to think up the rest.

I would appreciate any constructive criticism from people (flaming will be summarily ignored however).

Btw, Wishstone, I can't help but notice that the stories from Literary challenge 5 and 6 were still not up when last I checked, is everything alright there?