Betrayal of the Empire (Series)
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Join Date: Dec 2007
STO Critique responses
09-25-2011, 10:27 PM
Thanks to the folks that critiqued it so far on STO.
I corrected the "Too be continued..." to read "To be continued..."
Also corrected "Hunt you down like targh" to read "Hunt you donw like a targh." No one hit me on this one but I saw it when reading my script as I worked on part two.
For the comment regarding to many locations causing long load times. I appologize for the load times howver the number of locations were needed to tell the story properly. I do appreciate your point.
Again thanks to all who have played the mission and critiqued it so far. I appreciate all the input and comments.