AdmiralMurphy's "Victory is Q" - An in-depth look (spoilers)
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Join Date: Dec 2007
01-11-2012, 04:21 AM
Mine got some more humor laced in when I eliminated all the "continues" and did the last typo pass.
The big thing I might want to do with mine is eliminate the [firstname[ [lastname] since that can lead to repetition with characters who have one name.