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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 18
02-20-2012, 10:41 AM
Despite having played off and on since launch, this is my first (and second and third) ever forum post on the official forums.

Hope you enjoy The Intruder Part 1 and Part 2.

Any feedback, especially from the more experienced fan fiction writers (which is pretty much everyone as this is my first story) would be appreciated. I hope to write more in the future and I fully realise a need to improve each time if people are to keep reading.

I apologise for not researching any technobabble or even how stardates work, I hope that it doesn't deract to much from the story.