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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
This was an expertly crafted mission, with a great story and believable (albeit occasionally humorous) characters. You have an excellent command of both humor and substance, and you clearly know your Trek lore. On a side note, I enjoyed the inside-jokes and the shout-outs to some of your friends at StarbaseUGC (ahem, "Dr. Aharvah?") The special effects were very well done--particularly the Orion pheromones. My favorite part of the mission was the near-perfect dialogue. Well done!

As far as names go, Slaves and Seductions captures the theme of your mission very well. The only thing I could come up with as a possible substitute was Orion Intoxication, or just plain Intoxication... but I'm not sure that either of those would be better (I'll let you know if I think up anything else).