"Slaves and Seductions" - Feedback, please
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Join Date: Dec 2007
A Highly Polished and Enjoyable Mission
03-13-2012, 10:17 PM
This was an expertly crafted mission, with a great story and believable (albeit occasionally humorous) characters. You have an excellent command of both humor and substance, and you clearly know your Trek lore. On a side note, I enjoyed the inside-jokes and the shout-outs to some of your friends at StarbaseUGC (ahem, "Dr. Aharvah?") The special effects were very well done--particularly the Orion pheromones. My favorite part of the mission was the near-perfect dialogue. Well done!
As far as names go,
Slaves and Seductions
captures the theme of your mission very well. The only thing I could come up with as a possible substitute was
, or just plain
... but I'm not sure that either of those would be better (I'll let you know if I think up anything else).