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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
(Cryptic) Klingon Mission - Blood of the Empire
Author: Cryptic
Allegiance: Klingon
Project ID: Cryptic

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Summary: This is a great mission which makes my Klingon blood boil at the sting of glorious battle. The map designs are excellent and the battles glorious throughout. The story dialogue is very well written. I would highly recommend this mission to any Klingon faction member who loves a good short story combined with many glorious space and ground battles.

Below as with my other mission review for the Federation mission “Skirmish” I recommend the authors of the mission take a good hard look at the use of the response buttons. In general terms “Continue” works for generalized log information or in circumstances were the player’s response is not necessarily needed or required. However this should be looked at when it concerns dialogue that contains a question that is directed at a player or when a BOFF makes a report or gives a suggested course of action. The uses of “Continue” are the only issues I noted below.

Below are a couple things I noted while playing the mission. Everything in this write up should be seen as suggestions on ways I felt you could improve certain elements of the mission. They are yours to do with as you see fit.

Mission Description: This is a good, detailed description. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description.

Grant Mission Dialogue: The grant dialogue is well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue.

Mission Task: This initial task is good with a clear location for the start of the first mission map. I noted no spelling errors with this task.

Mission Entry Prompt: This is a standard mission entry prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt.

MAPS:
Norgh System: This is a good map design with glorious battles. The story dialogue is very well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The use of the response button “Continue” in general and when used as a response to a BOFF report or recommendation.

Praxis Belt: This is a good map design with glorious battles and well written dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The use of the response button “Continue”.

First City: This is a good map design with glorious battles and good dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The use of the response button “Continue”.

KDF Headquarters: This is a great map design with many glorious battles. The story dialogue is very well written. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map. I noted one item to consider changing:
-The use of the response button “Continue”.

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This is a good mission in the Cryptic Klingon series. Thanks and keep up the good work.
Brian