Woe unto those with average talent who fancy themselves to be Renaissance artists.

Klytemnestra is obviously in love with her creation. She asks for feedback then rejects honest criticism offered with the best intent, as if nobody but her knows the best way to present this story. She reminds me of Ed Wood.

The story is awful to play through for all the reasons expounded by previous posters. Klytemnestra needs to start accepting that the negative feedback has some merit or she'll only succeed in attracting even more flak over her mess of a holonovel.