Literary Challenge #20 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Dec 2007
06-05-2012, 09:31 AM
Captain Conrad: it did seem a little off topic, but i always like when people add in stuff from the game. it was good but i could have used a little more cowbell.... er, i mean subject. If it had more of the Captain's thoughts on leaving or the actual act of it would have been spot on.
Captain Owen: It wasn't bad, but it did seem like you skipped the topic itself.
Soriedem: I agree with Kira Yamato, that WAS a really interesting way of doing this, and i liked the premise as a whole. nice work Sir.
Reshaan: I liked it but it was a bit hard to read due to the spacing. It just seemed very "wall of text". Straighten that up and i'd say you're good to go.
As always and in the interest of fairness i look forward to hearing any and all feedback on what i've written as well as adding an honest opinion if wanted.