Literary Challenge #20 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Dec 2007
06-05-2012, 08:21 PM
Vauck: I can see where you're trying to go with this, but it just didn't seem very trek. Down Periscope yes, but there was a lot in there that just seemed vulgar for a quick laugh rather than well written vulgarity. I can see actual people in those situations, but personally it just didn't work for me in terms of Star Trek.
Captain Owen: My actual main character that i play in game is Wraith, who IS the genetically engineered killing machine, but for the sake of story and keeping it close to canon being an augment he would never really be allowed to serve in any official capacity so i have the Captain Donovan character. I definitely like including him in the stories and would love to do so more depending on the challenges.
Although looking back, Vauck was right about me getting a bit off topic as that character though. I didn't really notice it until he mentioned it, so thank you.