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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Dec 2007
Posts: 120
# 11
06-14-2012, 08:13 PM
Yeah, all this mission needs is a better plot hook. How about "Admiral seems to have defected and has taken top secret plans with her. Get her back now! Oh, she's Undine? Shoot her."

Just a bit of text reworking and the removal of the admiral from your party. Done.