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Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 183
# 8
06-21-2012, 06:14 AM
Hello,

I would like to hear your opinion on my first mission. Would be happy if you find the time.


Mission Name: Shadows of the Past
Author: backyardserenade
Minimum Level: 31+
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HHG6JJ82J
Estimated Mission Length: 30+ minutes (might be longer)
Method of Report Delivery: Forum post (+ here)

Description:
An Orb of the Prophets was stolen during a recent True Way raid on the Bajoran capital. Starfleet Command wants you to investigate the whereabouts of a Bajoran ship that apparently engaged the True Way raiders responsible for the theft.

Head to the Toron System in the Beta Ursae Sector Block to search for the S.S. Ratosha.

Further comments:
My first foundry mission. I would love some feedback on map design, story progression, characters and dialogs.

Since I'm not a native speaker I would also appreciate comments on spelling and language mistakes.

Forum thread: here
STOWiki site: here

Thanks for your feedback and thanks in advance!

"Sometimes you have to do things that you hate, so you can survive to fight another day."

Last edited by backyardserenade; 07-02-2012 at 02:59 AM.