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Join Date: Aug 2012
Posts: 30
# 250
08-18-2012, 01:29 PM
Originally Posted by evil70th View Post
Federation Mission - Mindcrawlers
Author: k668
Allegiance: Federation
Thanks a lot for taking the time for such a detailed review - particularly for the extensive feedback concerning the dialog. As English isn't my native language, there's probably always little details I'm missing or getting wrong(ish), and there's only so much a spellchecker can do. Thus, I found your suggestions very helpful. I assume I'll stick reasonably close to them.

I wasn't too sure about the of quantity fog either, so I see there's probably reason for some fine-tuning .

Again, thanks for taking the time to review, and I'm glad you've had your bit of fun with the mission - even though you hate spiders .