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Join Date: Jun 2012
Posts: 884
# 253
08-18-2012, 11:33 PM
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Originally Posted by k668 View Post
Thanks a lot for taking the time for such a detailed review - particularly for the extensive feedback concerning the dialog. As English isn't my native language, there's probably always little details I'm missing or getting wrong(ish), and there's only so much a spellchecker can do. Thus, I found your suggestions very helpful. I assume I'll stick reasonably close to them.

I wasn't too sure about the of quantity fog either, so I see there's probably reason for some fine-tuning .

Again, thanks for taking the time to review, and I'm glad you've had your bit of fun with the mission - even though you hate spiders .
Glad I could help. I enjoyed the mission and I thought it was very creative. Well done!

Thanks for authroing,
Brian
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