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Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 511
# 4
09-11-2012, 02:52 PM
I liked it. It was a good concept and well put together. My only real complaint was that it was way too easy; my KDF captain is a VA sci and I blew through it. The space portions never even dropped my shields, and the ground combat wasn't hard, just time-consuming in that I didn't seem to be doing much damage to the Devidians, even though they weren't really damaging me. Some spelling and grammatical errors in the dialogue; I can overlook that, despite being a bit of a grammar nazi.

Like I said, it was a great concept, I'd like to see it fleshed out later and made a bit more challenging. Keep it up though!

I give it 4/5.
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