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Mission Name: Ghosts of War, Part III ("Chasing Ghosts") - Remaster
Author: NCC-89471
Minimum Level: 35+
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HLAJXIZUN
Estimated Mission Length: 30-45 Minutes
Method of Report Delivery: Post to this forum thread
Federation Mission - Ghosts of War, Part III ("Chasing Ghosts") - Remaster
Author: NCC-89471
Allegiance: Federation
Project ID: ST-HLAJXIZUN

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Summary: This is a great mission in the series. From the great map design, battles, and excellent story dialogue this mission is a lot of fun. You did a great job with the updating of this mission. I would highly recommend this mission to all players who like the combination of a good map design, tough, but fun battles, and excellent story dialogue. I was riveted in my seat for this rollercoaster ride of a mission. Great job!

Mission Description: This is a good description. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this description.

Grant Mission Dialogue: This is a good grant dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue.

Mission Task: This is a good initial task with a clear start location for the first custom map. I noted no spelling errors with this task.

Mission Entry Prompt: This is a good use of the prompt. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this prompt.

MAPS:
1: Bironex Depot - Space: This is a good map design with very well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

2: Bironex Depot - Interior: This is a good map design with excellent interaction and very well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

3: Ready Room - Interior: This is a good map design with excellent story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

4: Leneka V - Space: This is a good map design with excellent and very detailed story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

5: Leneka V base - Interior: This is a good map design with tough battles and well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

6: Leneka V base - Interior: This is a good map design with tough battles and well written story dialogue. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue. I noted one item to consider changing:
-When planting the charges no devices appeared. Consider adding a device each time the player plants a charge. It would add to the story.

7: Leneka V - Space: This is a good map design with tough battles, well written story dialogue, and is a good wrap up to this sequel in the series. I noted no spelling or grammatical errors with this dialogue or any issues with the map.

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Thanks again for authoring and for giving me the chance to review your work. You did a great job updating this mission and I had a blast playing it. I look forward to playing/reviewing the next mission in the series.
Brian

This critique report also filed 09/20/2012 on forum posting for: In depth mission reports upon request.
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