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Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 1,213
"Finding Resolution" by ajstoner

Good Stuff:
  • Great dialogue, although for my Vulcan toon a wee bit flipant. Added a whole new layer of enjoyment. Reminded me of a Moonlighting episode ala Bruce Willis.
  • Well thought out, progressive storyline. Actually got me excited about a mission.
  • Final Battle bordering on 'EPIC'

Ruff Edges
  • Spellcheck needs a little work.
  • The OPS conversation to regain control of the turbo lift unclear, but I chalk that up to the game mechanics and the limitations fo the foundry.
  • The initial fleets too spaced apart - was really never a threat.

Admiral Thrax