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Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 4,331
# 10
12-12-2012, 04:15 PM
Lovely story, very easy to visualize, and not at all complicated My one hint of disappointment was that it was a holodeck recreation of the event, rather than a 'beam up and away', but equally, it showed that however much time had passed, Mari was still on the Captain's mind, which was equally nice

PS Welcome to the party