Literary Challenge #35 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
12-28-2012, 08:46 PM
Thanks for the compliment!
I read yours too, and I've got to say, you've got a real talent yourself.
Really clever! I was rather confused by your story until I read your explanation. I can't wait to read more!
A couple things I feel I should explain about mine:
First, yes Bryan is actually the XO (well, one of two XOs actually) in the fleet that I'm in.
Second, the AI (Athena, which shares the name of the ship) is actually a full AI, completely self-aware and capable of independent thought and emotion. She controls the ships point defense turrets, makes adjustments to the ship's power systems as needed among other things that no crewman could handle quickly enough.
Th rest of the story should be fairly self-explanatory (especially the part at the end with the ring
Vice Admiral Bryan Mitchel Valot
Commanding officer: Odyssey class U.S.S. Athena
Admiral of the 1st Assault Fleet
Join date: Some time in Closed Beta