Literary Challenge #36 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
01-19-2013, 05:46 PM
Originally Posted by
I forgot to say...
Yes, that would be a pretty funny conversation
Worf (glowers): "I beg your pardon, Captain?"
Oh, and here's Alyosha's human form.
His hair should be a bit messier than that (sometimes he doesn't pay attention to it), but within the limits of the character creator, this gets the general idea across.
Cmdrscarlet--I definitely enjoyed your entry! I must say, Harrington is fortunate his captain was disposed to consider his usefulness and not write him up for his pranks. Though one wonders if he might still get a few unpleasant details as a result...
Oh, and I must also commend you for your narrative pacing in the log-entry portion of the challenge. Some characters are natural storytellers; others aren't. Yours is, and I could imagine her really telling that story. She would be very engaging to listen to in person, one imagines.
Do you like story-based Foundry missions? If so, please check out my mission, "Finding Lascaux."