Literary Challenge #36 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
01-22-2013, 12:17 AM
Very nice...I liked all of the different personalities on display there. I could imagine what each of those people must've been like when they were alive (assuming they were from prior time periods).
I'm curious...was the Klingon a TOS Klingon? For some reason that's what I pictured.
I'm not quite sure I got what was going on with the metreon gas jar, though, or why someone was (presumably) firing their tetryon weapon in your captain's ready room, though.
The only thing you might want to address from a formatting standpoint is that whenever you copied this from your word processor, the punctuation didn't translate properly onto the forum. But the actual content of your work was good, beyond the one confusing area.
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