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Lt. Commander
Join Date: Jul 2012
Posts: 147
# 48
01-24-2013, 07:27 PM
Originally Posted by bortjinx View Post
It's not very well written, since I've just knocked it up in half an hour over my lunch break.
I also liked your idea of mirror Trill society. My main recommendation is something you have probably already thought of - make the formatting consistent.

I find myself coming up with ideas while commuting. Perhaps the frustration with other drivers is taken out on my fictional crew later on?