Literary Challenge #37 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Sep 2012
01-26-2013, 01:41 PM
I agree with
: that part really grabbed me. You used a bad word too!
Admittedly, I realized that both were Trill about a third of the way down (iirc). So, the name switching was confusing at first, but that was less your writing and more my overall ignorance of the Trill ... thing.
Overall, I enjoyed it and look forward to more from you in future LCs
Kathryn S. Beringer
The Dawn Patrol
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