Literary Challenge #37 Discussion Thread
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Join Date: Jul 2012
01-26-2013, 02:26 PM
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I also edited mine and have decided it is finished. The way it ended leads to the imagination the final conversation between the Captains and any ramifications may be dealt with in later LCs if the opportunity arrises.
Well done. The beam burning into the Deltan's throat is a nice visual (as in written well, not something I want to happen to me). I expect that the 'payment' for Kathryn's services will be interesting whenever it is revealed.