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Originally Posted by ironphoenix113
On that note: Your Epilogue was awsome. Not much to say other than you nailed it.  |
I agree; I think marcus' entry really benefitted from that epilogue. I really don't know his characters very well yet, but it made sense that after something so huge--especially after 15 years of writing a character--there should be some sort of look at the emotional fallout from that moment.