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Join Date: Jun 2012
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# 16
01-28-2013, 05:44 PM
It was short, but it was well thought out.

Love the attention to detail of the NPCs matching up with the NPCs from Night of the Comet and the "interaction" with the mailbox. Even had some decent humor with the Orion Bartender (though felt it got a bit overboard).

Though one thing I'm surprised you didn't add to the storyline, is an explaination of the massive Paradox of Driffen's Comet. We blew it up in the past, yet it's there in the Future.