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Join Date: Sep 2012
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# 102
02-04-2013, 12:22 PM
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Originally Posted by gulberat View Post
Wraith--just read your entry.

One thing I think I'd like to see more of from you would be the actual dialogue between the characters rather than just narrative. You did so well when you showed your narrator's final words to the mirror Donovan in writing something compelling there. More please?
I have finished it as well and - for a Captain's Log - it was well done!!

But I agree with gulberat above in that I would be interested to see dialogue from your talent as well.

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